Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often, especially during my free time. Moreover, I find writing helpful when I have a lot of studying to do, as it helps me organize my thoughts. I particularly enjoy creative writing, such as stories and poems.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to explain your reasons more specifically to make your answer richer.

Ejemplo: I usually like to write short stories and poems because they allow me to express my feelings. Often, I base my writing on real-life experiences, which makes it more authentic. Additionally, I sometimes write crime scenes since I enjoy creating thrilling and suspenseful stories.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more specific about how you want to improve your writing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing would change if I had the opportunity to write professionally. For instance, I would like to improve my creativity and explore different genres such as satire and comedy to broaden my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is brief and lacks clarity. Try to explain your preference with specific reasons and use correct grammar. Also, avoid vague words like 'they' without clear reference.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting over typing because writing on paper feels more personal and helps me remember information better. Moreover, I find that handwriting allows me to connect more deeply with my thoughts compared to typing on a computer.

× Besides I enjoy writing, I enjoy creative writing as well.

✓ Besides, I enjoy writing; I enjoy creative writing as well.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation to separate the clauses. 'Besides' should be followed by a comma, and the two independent clauses should be separated by a semicolon or a conjunction. This improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I usually write based on my real life experiences.

✓ I usually write based on my real-life experiences.

The phrase 'real life' should be hyphenated as 'real-life' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. This is a standard grammatical convention to clarify meaning.

× I enjoy thrilling experiences that I make up watching.

✓ I enjoy thrilling experiences that I make up while watching.

The preposition 'while' is needed to indicate the time during which the action of watching occurs. Without it, the sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect.

× If I get a chance to write more professionally, I I would definitely like to take it up and enhance my writing and take it to the next level in terms of creativity.

✓ If I get a chance to write more professionally, I would definitely like to take it up, enhance my writing, and take it to the next level in terms of creativity.

There is a repeated word 'I I' which is a typographical error. Also, the sentence is lengthy and can be improved by adding commas to separate the actions for better readability and structure.

× I think they are more comprehensive and they connect to a personal level rather than typing it.

✓ I think it is more comprehensive and connects on a personal level rather than typing.

The pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers to 'paper' which is singular. It should be 'it'. Also, 'connect to a personal level' is better expressed as 'connects on a personal level'. The phrase 'typing it' is awkward; removing 'it' improves clarity.