Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise.

Ejemplo: I don't write a lot because most of my work is done on my laptop. However, I often make notes by hand, as I find it helps me keep track of my tasks better than online reminders.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit informal and incomplete. Try to avoid filler phrases like 'And yeah, that's.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I usually write down things I need to remember or tasks with deadlines because it helps me stay organized. Apart from that, I don't write much.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons.

Ejemplo: I don't think the things I write will change because I am not very creative. Therefore, I usually stick to writing simple notes rather than essays or poems.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor errors and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to be more concise.

Ejemplo: It depends on the task. If I need to make a quick note, I prefer handwriting. However, for longer writing, I usually type on my laptop.

× I don't know generally preferred writing since all of my work is usually on my laptop, but I do like making notes often and I think it helps me keep a track of my tasks better than some online reminder.

✓ I don't generally prefer writing since all of my work is usually on my laptop, but I do like making notes often and I think it helps me keep track of my tasks better than some online reminders.

The phrase 'I don't know generally preferred writing' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't generally prefer writing' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'keep a track' should be 'keep track' as 'track' is an uncountable noun here. 'Some online reminder' should be plural 'some online reminders' to match the plural sense. The prepositions and article usage were incorrect, so correcting them improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I don't know generally preferred writing since all of my work is usually on my laptop, but I do like making notes often and I think it helps me keep a track of my tasks better than some online reminder.

✓ I don't generally prefer writing since all of my work is usually on my laptop, but I do like making notes often and I think it helps me keep track of my tasks better than some online reminders.

The phrase 'some online reminder' uses singular 'reminder' but implies plural. It should be 'some online reminders' to agree in number with 'some'. Also, 'a track' should be 'track' as 'track' is uncountable in this context.

× I would often only write down things that I need to remember or something that has to be done before some deadline, but apart from that I do not usually write much. And yeah, that's.

✓ I would often only write down things that I need to remember or something that has to be done before a deadline, but apart from that I do not usually write much. And yeah, that's it.

The phrase 'some deadline' is better as 'a deadline' for natural usage. The sentence ending with 'And yeah, that's.' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'it' completes the thought. This improves sentence completeness and clarity.

× I do not necessarily think so because I don't think I am a very creative person that I can make some essay or poems.

✓ I do not necessarily think so because I don't think I am a very creative person who can write essays or poems.

The conjunction 'that' is incorrectly used to connect the clause; 'who' is appropriate when referring to a person. Also, 'make some essay or poems' is incorrect; 'write essays or poems' is the correct collocation. This correction improves grammatical correctness and natural expression.

× I do not necessarily think so because I don't think I am a very creative person that I can make some essay or poems.

✓ I do not necessarily think so because I don't think I am a very creative person who can write essays or poems.

The phrase 'some essay or poems' mixes singular and plural incorrectly. It should be 'essays or poems' to correctly represent plural forms. Also, 'make' is not the correct verb for writing literary works; 'write' is appropriate.

× It depends on what I need to down, so if it is something that I have to do or something that requires just making a quick note of, then I would prefer to actually manually write it down.

✓ It depends on what I need to write down, so if it is something that I have to do or something that requires just making a quick note of, then I would prefer to actually manually write it down.

The phrase 'need to down' is missing the verb 'write'; the correct phrase is 'need to write down'. This correction fixes the verb-preposition combination for clarity and grammatical correctness.