Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and organizing your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and keep your response within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't write much now, but when I was in school, I used to take notes all day, which was a valuable experience. However, nowadays, phones have replaced pens, so I prefer typing on my phone instead of writing by hand.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and avoid repetition. Provide specific reasons why you like writing your diary and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I like to write in my diary because it helps me record my daily routine and preserve my memories. This diary is very special to me as it keeps my personal experiences close to my heart.

Sugerencia: Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Make your answer more direct and use linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think the things I write will change. Since I use my diary to collect memories, it serves as a permanent record of my experiences in one book.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to compare typing and handwriting effectively.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I prefer typing these days because I depend on my phone a lot. I find typing easier and faster than handwriting, which usually takes more time.

× Not now but when I was in school I used to make notes and I had to write all the day and that was the best experience in my life because nowadays the place of pens has been taken by the phones now as compared to writing as I used to prefer phone nowadays.

✓ Not now but when I was in school I used to make notes and I had to write all day and that was the best experience in my life because nowadays the place of pens has been taken by phones as compared to writing, as I now prefer phones.

The phrase 'all the day' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'all day' (Grammar Problem Type ID:5). Also, 'I used to prefer phone nowadays' is contradictory and awkward; it should be 'I now prefer phones' to reflect the current preference. The plural form 'phones' is appropriate here because it refers to phones in general.

× Well I like to write my diary in which I can write my all the all my all routine and also I can take it as my memory in upcoming time and this diary is near to my heart.

✓ Well, I like to write in my diary where I can record my entire routine, and I can also keep it as a memory for the future. This diary is very dear to my heart.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect pronoun usage such as 'my all the all my all routine' which is confusing. It should be simplified to 'my entire routine'. Also, 'take it as my memory in upcoming time' is awkward; 'keep it as a memory for the future' is clearer and grammatically correct (Grammar Problem Type ID:12).

× No, I don't think. As I previously mentioned, I write a diary through which I can collect memories and I don't think it will be changed because it is one of the math one of the way to create my memories in a one book.

✓ No, I don't think so. As I previously mentioned, I write a diary through which I can collect memories, and I don't think it will change because it is one of the ways to create my memories in one book.

The phrase 'it will be changed' is incorrect; it should be 'it will change' (Grammar Problem Type ID:5). Also, 'one of the math one of the way' is incorrect and should be 'one of the ways'. The article 'a' before 'one book' is unnecessary; 'in one book' is correct. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Honestly, I prefer I prefer typing these days because nowadays I totally dependent on my phone and I can't expect my life without my phone. So I I find it quite easy to type as compared to writing because writing takes a lot of time whereas.

✓ Honestly, I prefer typing these days because nowadays I am totally dependent on my phone and I can't imagine my life without it. So, I find it quite easy to type compared to writing because writing takes a lot of time.

The phrase 'I totally dependent' is missing the modal verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense (Grammar Problem Type ID:4). Also, 'I can't expect my life' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I can't imagine my life'. The sentence ending with 'whereas' is incomplete and should be finished or removed for clarity.