Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하게 구성하고, 중복된 단어를 피하며, 5문장 이내로 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often, either on paper or on my laptop. I enjoy organizing my thoughts and exploring different perspectives, especially related to art. Writing helps me express my feelings clearly. It also allows me to reflect on my ideas more deeply.

Sugerencia: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 문장이 끊겨서 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: As I mentioned earlier, I enjoy organizing my thoughts and expressing different perspectives, especially about art. Writing allows me to clarify my feelings and ideas in a creative way. It helps me understand my emotions better.

Sugerencia: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 주어와 동사의 일치를 확인하고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Not really. I don't like to change my writing once it's done. I keep the mood I had when writing on paper. This process has really helped me improve my perspectives.

Sugerencia: 중복된 단어와 문법 오류가 있으며, 마지막 문장은 불완전합니다. 문장을 명확하고 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: When I write, I definitely prefer typing on my phone or laptop because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting. Typing allows me to easily edit and analyze my thoughts without making a mess. Handwriting can sometimes feel messy and slow.

× I often write on the paper or laptops.

✓ I often write on paper or on laptops.

'Write on the paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is an uncountable noun here and does not need 'the'. Also, 'laptops' need the preposition 'on' before them to be parallel and correct. So, 'on paper or on laptops' is the correct form.

× Because I love organizing my thoughts and par step perspectives in art scene.

✓ Because I love organizing my thoughts and part-step perspectives in the art scene.

The phrase 'par step perspectives' seems to be a typo or incorrect phrase; it should be 'part-step perspectives'. Also, 'art scene' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular scene. The sentence structure is incomplete and needs correction for clarity.

× I usually ride on my my feelings on my paper.

✓ I usually write down my feelings on my paper.

The verb 'ride' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'write down'. Also, 'my my' is a repetition error. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs correction to convey the intended meaning.

× As I mentioned earlier or enjoy over liesing my thoughts.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I enjoy overlaying my thoughts.

The phrase 'or enjoy over liesing' is incorrect. It should be 'I enjoy overlaying'. Also, a comma is needed after 'earlier' to separate clauses. 'Overlaying' is the correct verb form here.

× And expressing different perspectives.

✓ I also enjoy expressing different perspectives.

This is a sentence fragment starting with 'And'. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rewritten as a complete sentence. Adding 'I also enjoy' makes it complete.

× Especially related to arts in.

✓ Especially related to arts.

The preposition 'in' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase 'related to arts' is sufficient.

× I don't like change my writing.

✓ I don't like to change my writing.

After 'like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to change' or gerund 'changing'. Here, 'to change' fits better. So, 'I don't like to change my writing' is correct.

× I kept my mood on writing on the paper.

✓ I keep my mood when writing on paper.

The verb 'kept' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'keep' is appropriate. Also, 'on writing on the paper' is awkward; 'when writing on paper' is better.

× It is really helped me to improve my perspectives.

✓ It really helps me to improve my perspectives.

'Is helped' is incorrect; the correct form is 'helps' in present tense to match the context. 'It really helps me' is correct.

× I'm typing allows me to easily edit, analyze my thoughts without making a mess.

✓ Typing allows me to easily edit and analyze my thoughts without making a mess.

'I'm typing' is incorrect; it should be 'Typing' as the subject. Also, 'edit, analyze' needs 'and' to connect the verbs properly.

× All their handwriting can feel more.

✓ Handwriting can feel more personal.

The phrase 'All their handwriting can feel more' is incomplete and unclear. Possibly intended meaning is 'Handwriting can feel more personal'. The pronoun 'their' is unnecessary here.