Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 주어와 동사의 일치를 신경 써야 합니다. 또한, 불필요한 반복을 줄이고, 문장 연결을 위해 접속사를 활용하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: No, I don't write much. I prefer typing or speaking because writing takes a long time. Usually, I use voice messages to communicate because it's faster.

Sugerencia: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 주어와 동사의 일치를 맞추고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 이유를 설명할 때 구체적인 예시를 포함하면 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: I usually like to write social media posts on Instagram because I can share my thoughts with friends. It's fun to receive feedback and see what people think about my posts.

Sugerencia: 문장이 많이 끊기고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 이유를 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 어휘 선택에 신경 써서 자연스러운 표현을 사용해야 합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think what I write will change as I get older because my experiences and views will evolve. Also, new technologies might influence how I write in the future.

Sugerencia: 문장이 단절되고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 문장을 연결하여 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요하며, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 불필요한 단어는 제거해야 합니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. Also, typing is more convenient since I can quickly make changes while writing.

× No I don't. I prefer typing and speaking more than writing because writing take a long time so I usually use voice message to communicate.

✓ No I don't. I prefer typing and speaking more than writing because writing takes a long time so I usually use voice messages to communicate.

The verb 'take' should be in the third person singular form 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'writing'. Also, 'voice message' should be plural 'voice messages' to match the context of general use.

× Are usually like to write a social media post like Instagram because I can share with my friends.

✓ I usually like to write social media posts like on Instagram because I can share with my friends.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'Are usually like' should be 'I usually like'. Also, 'a social media post like Instagram' is awkward; it should be 'social media posts like on Instagram' to clarify the platform.

× It is fun to get feedback the what people think I wrote about.

✓ It is fun to get feedback on what people think I wrote about.

The phrase 'feedback the what' is incorrect; it should be 'feedback on what'. The definite article 'the' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Yes I do. When I get older my right of change becauses. Many experience and views will change.

✓ Yes I do. When I get older, my right to change because many experiences and views will change.

The phrase 'my right of change becauses' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'my right to change because'. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'many'.

× It affect what I write.

✓ It affects what I write.

The verb 'affect' should be in third person singular form 'affects' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.

× Also new technologies. Can make me more change?

✓ Also, new technologies can make me change more.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. It should be combined into one sentence with proper word order and punctuation.

× I prefer typing more than handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'more than'.

× Also it's convenient. In addition. I can change quickly. That. I run. Writing.

✓ Also, it's convenient. In addition, I can change what I write quickly.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. They should be combined and clarified to convey the intended meaning properly.