Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use clear sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain why you write, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often. Whenever I have complex thoughts, writing helps me to organise them clearly and express my feelings effectively on paper.

Sugerencia: Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you write and why.

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing poems and recording my daily activities because it helps me collect memories on a single page. This way, I can express my thoughts freely in words.

Sugerencia: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain how your writing changes and what remains constant. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, what I write changes depending on my mindset and thoughts. However, my emotions and daily lessons are constant themes in my writing.

Sugerencia: Make your preference clear and support it with reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar and avoid unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it allows me to express my thoughts more naturally. In contrast, typing sometimes disrupts the flow of my ideas.

× I ride when.

✓ I write when.

The student likely intended to say 'write' instead of 'ride'. 'Ride' is incorrect in this context as it means to travel on a vehicle or animal, whereas 'write' fits the context of expressing thoughts on paper.

× When I get complex thinking in my mind it's make me feel easy and I can write all my thoughts and my over Wellness on a paper.

✓ When I have complex thoughts in my mind, it makes me feel at ease and I can write all my thoughts and my overall wellness on paper.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'get complex thinking' is incorrect; 'have complex thoughts' is appropriate. 'Over Wellness' is likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'overall wellness'. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.

× I would like to write my thoughts poem, an work I did in my all day.

✓ I would like to write my thoughts, poems, and the work I did all day.

The phrase 'thoughts poem' is incorrect; it should be 'thoughts, poems'. 'An work' is wrong; 'work' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. 'In my all day' is incorrect; 'all day' suffices without 'in my'.

× It's like collecting memories in a one page.

✓ It's like collecting memories on one page.

The correct preposition with 'page' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'a one page' is incorrect; it should be 'one page' without 'a'.

× It's like expressing your thoughts in a form of words, in a form of like you want.

✓ It's like expressing your thoughts in the form of words, in the form you want.

The phrase 'in a form of words' should be 'in the form of words' because it refers to a specific form. Also, 'in a form of like you want' is awkward; 'in the form you want' is correct.

× I think the things I would write. Can change according to my mind set? My thoughts?

✓ I think the things I write can change according to my mindset and my thoughts.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Combining them into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Mind set' should be 'mindset' as one word.

× But the constant thing I think. The constant thing that I will write is. My emotions. Anne. What is the last of the day? What I learned from there?

✓ But the constant thing I think, the constant thing that I will write, is my emotions and what I learned at the end of the day.

The original is fragmented and unclear. 'Anne' is likely a mishearing or typo. 'What is the last of the day?' should be 'at the end of the day'. Combining into one sentence improves coherence.

× I prefer writing. Oh. Readings make like.

✓ I prefer writing. Oh, reading makes me feel like that.

'Readings make like' is incorrect and unclear. Possibly the student meant 'reading makes me feel like that'. 'Reading' is singular and needs 'makes'.

× Well, writing you can express your thoughts according to your minds and in typing.

✓ Well, with writing, you can express your thoughts according to your mind, but in typing,

'Your minds' should be 'your mind' as it refers to the singular person. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs conjunctions for clarity.

× You can't get a straight answer or the flow in typing is not a consistent I can say that.

✓ You can't get a straight flow or consistent answer in typing, I can say that.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Rearranging the sentence and correcting 'a consistent' to 'consistent' improves clarity and grammar.