Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answers more grammatically correct and clearer. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. For example, use proper verb forms and articles, and avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot. Whenever I notice something important, I make a note of it. I find this is the best way to manage my time and remember things easily. For instance, last time I went grocery shopping, I made a list to help me remember what to buy.

Sugerencia: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific about what you write and why, to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: I don't have a particular type of writing that I prefer. However, whenever I notice something important, I like to make notes so I don't forget. This helps me manage my time better and stay organized.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to show contrast between past and present. Be specific and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my writing habits have changed a lot. When I was studying, I preferred to make notes about my curriculum. But now, I mostly write notes about my daily routine, such as grocery lists, schedules, and appointments.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Avoid vague phrases and be more precise in your explanation.

Ejemplo: Actually, I prefer typing. Nowadays, most of us are used to modern technology, and since we always have our phones with us, it's very easy to make notes anytime and anywhere.

× Whenever I see, I start making the note.

✓ Whenever I see something, I start making notes.

The original sentence lacks an object after 'see' and uses 'the note' which is unnatural. Adding 'something' clarifies the object, and 'making notes' is the correct phrase for taking notes.

× I think it is best way to manage your time and it is very easy to remembering things I remember.

✓ I think it is the best way to manage your time and it is very easy to remember things.

The phrase 'best way' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'easy to remembering' is incorrect; the verb after 'easy to' should be in base form 'remember'.

× Last time when I visit for the grocery, I make a list of my grocery.

✓ Last time when I visited the grocery store, I made a list of my groceries.

The verbs 'visit' and 'make' should be in past tense 'visited' and 'made' to match the past time reference. Also, 'for the grocery' is incorrect; 'the grocery store' is more natural, and 'my grocery' should be plural 'my groceries'.

× Actually in there is not particular anything like which I prefer to write.

✓ Actually, there is nothing in particular that I prefer to write.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun use. 'There is nothing in particular' is the correct phrase, and 'that I prefer to write' clarifies the meaning.

× Whenever I notice something is important, I just prefer to make note of them so that I will not forget things and I always try to manage my time and organized it.

✓ Whenever I notice something is important, I just prefer to make notes of it so that I will not forget things, and I always try to manage my time and organize it.

'Make note of them' should be 'make notes of it' because 'something' is singular. Also, 'organized' should be 'organize' to match the verb form after 'try to'.

× Yes, it's changed a lot.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot.

The present perfect tense 'has changed' is appropriate here to indicate a change over time, rather than simple present 'it's changed' which is incorrect.

× Earlier when in my when I was studying ice preferred to make notes of my.

✓ Earlier, when I was studying, I preferred to make notes of my studies.

The sentence has word order issues and missing words. 'Ice' is likely a typo for 'I'. 'Make notes of my' is incomplete; adding 'studies' clarifies the meaning. Past tense 'preferred' is correct.

× But now it is I'm making the notes of my daily routine, like my grocery, my schedules, appointment, this type of stuff.

✓ But now, I am making notes of my daily routine, like my groceries, my schedule, appointments, and this type of stuff.

'It is I'm making' is incorrect; 'I am making' is correct. 'Grocery' should be plural 'groceries', 'schedules' should be singular 'schedule' or plural consistently, and 'appointment' should be plural 'appointments' to match the list.

× Actually, I preferred typing.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing.

The question is about current preference, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate rather than past tense 'preferred'.

× I think we all are now addicted to the modern.

✓ I think we are all now addicted to modern technology.

'Addicted to the modern' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'technology' clarifies the meaning, and 'we are all' is more natural word order.

× Even so, we all have the phone in always in their hand, so it is very easy to make a note of anything at anytime and anywhere.

✓ Even so, we all always have the phone in our hands, so it is very easy to make a note of anything anytime and anywhere.

'In always in their hand' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'always have the phone in our hands'. Also, 'anytime' is one word, and 'at anytime' is unnecessary.