Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but lacks natural flow and has grammatical errors. Try to use correct tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a supporting detail using linking words.

Ejemplo: Currently, I don't write much because I mostly work on a laptop. However, during my school and college days, I used to write a lot to study and revise my notes.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers different types of writing, which is good. However, the sentences are fragmented and some grammar is incorrect. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer explanations. Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I like to write study notes because it helps me organize my thoughts clearly. Additionally, I often keep a journal to reflect on my daily experiences. Moreover, I enjoy writing emails and messages to stay connected with friends and family.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, which is good. However, there are some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use proper conjunctions and articles, and try to make your sentences more natural and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge. For instance, when I was younger, my writing was simpler, but now I express my emotions and thoughts more clearly and creatively.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains fragmented sentences and some grammatical errors. Try to combine your ideas into complete sentences using linking words. Also, avoid repetition and ensure clarity.

Ejemplo: For most of my work, I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. However, when I am studying, I usually handwrite my notes because it helps me remember the information better.

× my work is on laptop on PC

✓ my work is on a laptop or PC

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly repeated and the article 'a' is missing before 'laptop'. The correct phrase is 'on a laptop or PC' to indicate the device used.

× I don't rightly notes

✓ I don't write notes properly

The phrase 'don't rightly notes' is incorrect. 'Rightly' is an adverb and cannot modify a noun directly. The correct expression is 'write notes properly' to convey the intended meaning.

× I used to write a lot was study my notes

✓ I used to write a lot and study my notes

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and structure. Adding 'and' connects the two actions correctly, making the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× Whenever I write, I write my study. Work.

✓ Whenever I write, I write about my study work.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining 'study' and 'work' with 'about' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× It gives me organize my thoughts clearly

✓ It helps me organize my thoughts clearly

The verb 'gives' is incorrectly used with 'organize'. The correct verb is 'helps' followed by the base verb 'organize' without 'to'.

× often keep my journal to reflect on my daily experiences

✓ I often keep a journal to reflect on my daily experiences

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' and the article 'a' before 'journal'. Adding these corrects the sentence structure and usage.

× I usually use handwriting to take notes an it helps me to keep remember the.

✓ I usually use handwriting to take notes and it helps me remember them.

The conjunction 'an' should be 'and'. The phrase 'keep remember the' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember them' to refer to the notes properly.

× my writing style an ideas the structure I want to write will evolve with

✓ my writing style, ideas, and the structure I want to write will evolve

The sentence has missing conjunctions and incorrect pronoun usage. Adding commas and 'and' clarifies the list and removes the unnecessary 'with' at the end.

× I express my emotions, thoughts more clearly and creatively

✓ I express my emotions and thoughts more clearly and creatively

A conjunction 'and' is needed between 'emotions' and 'thoughts' to correctly list the items.

× Writing. For most of my work, I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient.

✓ For most of my work, I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient.

The word 'Writing.' is a fragment and unnecessary. Removing it corrects the sentence structure.