Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using complete sentences and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'writing helped me to improve my writing skill an. Learn the new vocabulary,' you can say 'Writing helps me improve my skills and learn new vocabulary.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often, usually essays every day. Writing helps me improve my skills and learn new vocabulary. For example, when I am at home, I like to write short stories about myself, which helps me understand myself better.

Sugerencia: Focus on making your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons. Avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea. For example, instead of repeating 'I always write about myself,' explain why you do it.

Ejemplo: I like writing about myself and my personality because it helps me reflect on my daily experiences and emotions. This practice allows me to understand myself better and improve my writing skills.

Sugerencia: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly. Also, check your grammar to make your ideas easier to understand. For example, say 'My writing has changed because I have gained more knowledge and experience.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I think the things I write have changed over time. Because I have gained more knowledge and experience, my ideas have developed. For example, when I was a child, my essays were not very good, but now I improve them by making detailed outlines and writing more clearly.

Sugerencia: Make your sentences complete and connect your ideas with linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points. For example, say 'I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my skills and learn new vocabulary. Also, writing by hand helps me correct my mistakes.'

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer handwriting when I write because it helps me improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary. For example, I often write short essays on paper, which also helps me notice and correct my mistakes.

× Yes, I quite often write an essay everyday because writing helped me to improve my writing skill an.

✓ Yes, I quite often write essays every day because writing helps me to improve my writing skills.

The word 'essay' should be plural 'essays' because it refers to multiple instances of writing. 'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' to indicate frequency. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to refer to multiple abilities.

× Learn the new vocabulary.

✓ I learn new vocabulary.

This is a sentence fragment missing a subject and verb. Adding 'I' as subject and 'learn' as verb completes the sentence.

× For example, when I am at home, I can write a short story about myself, which I can know myself clearly.

✓ For example, when I am at home, I can write a short story about myself, which helps me to know myself clearly.

The phrase 'which I can know myself clearly' is incorrect. It should be 'which helps me to know myself clearly' to express purpose and clarity.

× An study about myself.

✓ And study about myself.

The word 'An' is incorrect here; it should be 'And' to connect the sentence properly.

× I definitely like writing about myself and my personality everyday.

✓ I definitely like writing about myself and my personality every day.

'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' to indicate frequency.

× Writing is one of the most common thing I always do an I do it every day for example, I always write about myself which I find out it had made to reflect on my daily experience an emotion which is.

✓ Writing is one of the most common things I always do, and I do it every day. For example, I always write about myself, which I find helps me to reflect on my daily experiences and emotions.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'one of the most common'. 'An' should be 'and'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'Had made to reflect' is incorrect; 'helps me to reflect' is correct. 'Experience' and 'emotion' should be plural 'experiences' and 'emotions'.

× Let me know.

✓ It lets me know.

The phrase 'Let me know' is incomplete and unclear here. It should be 'It lets me know' to indicate the writing helps the student understand emotions.

× Yes, I believe the thing I would write have changed.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I write have changed.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'have changed'. 'Would write' is incorrect tense here; 'write' is better to indicate current writing.

× As I get the knowledge and many experience my idea have changed.

✓ As I gain knowledge and much experience, my ideas have changed.

'Get the knowledge' is better as 'gain knowledge'. 'Many experience' should be 'much experience' because 'experience' is uncountable. 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match 'have changed'.

× I have many opening an idea which come out to my mind.

✓ I have many new ideas that come to my mind.

'Opening an idea' is incorrect; 'new ideas' is better. 'Which come out to my mind' should be 'that come to my mind'.

× For example as a child I write an essay.

✓ For example, as a child, I wrote an essay.

'Write' should be past tense 'wrote' to match 'as a child'. 'An essay' is correct here.

× Is bad, but now I can improve it by plenty outline and no more clearly on my side.

✓ It was bad, but now I can improve it with plenty of outlines and more clarity on my side.

'Is bad' should be 'It was bad' for past tense. 'Plenty outline' should be 'plenty of outlines'. 'No more clearly on my side' is unclear; 'more clarity on my side' is better.

× Yes, I definitely prefer handwriting when I am writing because I can improve my writing skills and learning new vocabulary.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer handwriting when I am writing because I can improve my writing skills and learn new vocabulary.

'Learning' should be 'learn' to match the modal verb 'can'.

× For example, I actually write a short essay in a paper because it can help me to learn new vocabulary an it's also.

✓ For example, I actually write a short essay on paper because it can help me to learn new vocabulary, and it's also

'In a paper' should be 'on paper'. The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly; a complete sentence is needed.

× Help me to. Correct, my mistake is a.

✓ help me to correct my mistakes.

This is a sentence fragment and should be combined with the previous sentence to form a complete thought.