Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

Ejemplo: I don't write much because my handwriting is not very neat, and I prefer using digital devices to record important information.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为混乱，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用清晰的句子结构，具体说明写作内容并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually write down important things I need to remember, such as tasks for work or study, and special dates like my family members' birthdays.

Sugerencia: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ejemplo: Yes, the things I write often change over time. For example, I may set goals that later seem unrealistic, so I adjust or give them up. I also find new ways to improve how I write.

Sugerencia: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议简洁表达偏好，说明原因并用连接词使句子流畅。

Ejemplo: I prefer typing because the keyboard helps me with spelling, keeps my writing neat, and allows me to organize my thoughts more easily.

× I don't write a lot because the character I write looks now to standard and looks not elegant at HOR and also I think I don't have too much patient relied on things.

✓ I don't write a lot because the characters I write look not too standard and look not elegant at HOR, and also I think I don't have too much patience relying on things.

这里的“character”应为复数形式“characters”，因为指的是多个字。"patient"应为名词“patience”，表示耐心。

× I don't write a lot because the character I write looks now to standard and looks not elegant at HOR and also I think I don't have too much patient relied on things.

✓ I don't write a lot because the characters I write look not too standard and look not elegant at HOR, and also I think I don't have too much patience relying on things.

“relied on things”中的“relied on”用法不当，应改为现在分词“relying on”，表示持续的动作。

× I prefer to use digital diverse to record everything I need to remember.

✓ I prefer to use digital devices to record everything I need to remember.

“diverse”是形容词，错误使用，应为名词“devices”，表示设备。

× Mostly I write down the things I need to remember or things that I'm interesting, order tasks or jobs that I'm encountered in my life or study.

✓ Mostly I write down the things I need to remember or things that I'm interested in, order tasks or jobs that I encounter in my life or study.

“I'm interesting”应为“I'm interested in”，表示对某事感兴趣。"I'm encountered"错误，正确应为主动语态“I encounter”。

× Mostly I write down the things I need to remember or things that I'm interesting, order tasks or jobs that I'm encountered in my life or study.

✓ Mostly I write down the things I need to remember or things that I'm interested in, order tasks or jobs that I encounter in my life or study.

“interested”后面需要介词“in”来引出感兴趣的对象。

× And also I write something that's really important to me, like the birthday of my family.

✓ And also I write something that's really important to me, like the birthdays of my family members.

“birthday”应为复数形式“birthdays”，因为家庭成员有多个生日。

× Yes, I think this thing is not right changing over time.

✓ Yes, I think this thing is not right and is changing over time.

句子结构不完整，缺少连词“and”连接两个谓语。

× For example our phone session time goes by the gradually realized some of them are not achievable, so I have to give up.

✓ For example, our phone session time goes by, and gradually I realize some of them are not achievable, so I have to give up.

缺少逗号和连词“and”使句子不通顺。

× For example our phone session time goes by the gradually realized some of them are not achievable, so I have to give up.

✓ For example, our phone session time goes by, and gradually I realize some of them are not achievable, so I have to give up.

“realized”前缺少主语“I”，应明确主语。

× Also, I sometimes find new methods or ideas that helps me to adapt and improve my writing more effectively.

✓ Also, I sometimes find new methods or ideas that help me to adapt and improve my writing more effectively.

“methods or ideas”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“help”。

× Also, I sometimes find new methods or ideas that helps me to adapt and improve my writing more effectively.

✓ Also, I sometimes find new methods or ideas that help me to adapt and improve my writing more effectively.

关系代词引导的从句中，谓语动词应与先行词复数一致，故用“help”。

× I prefer I prefer typing because sometimes the keyboards will remind me how to spelling the words and the words that I might forgot and also it's organize my thoughts, makes the character looks neat and clean and also I can add easily ioffer spelling wats wrong.

✓ I prefer typing because sometimes the keyboard will remind me how to spell the words and the words that I might forget, and also it organizes my thoughts, makes the characters look neat and clean, and also I can easily add or correct spelling mistakes.

“the keyboards”应为单数“the keyboard”，因为通常指一台键盘。"how to spelling"应为“how to spell”，动词不定式。"might forgot"应为“might forget”，动词原形。"it's organize"应为“it organizes”，主谓一致。"makes the character looks"应为“makes the characters look”，主谓一致且“look”用原形。"ioffer spelling wats wrong"表达不清，改为“add or correct spelling mistakes”。

× I prefer I prefer typing because sometimes the keyboards will remind me how to spelling the words and the words that I might forgot and also it's organize my thoughts, makes the character looks neat and clean and also I can add easily ioffer spelling wats wrong.

✓ I prefer typing because sometimes the keyboard will remind me how to spell the words and the words that I might forget, and also it organizes my thoughts, makes the characters look neat and clean, and also I can easily add or correct spelling mistakes.

“character”应为复数“characters”，指多个字。