Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid irrelevant phrases like 'I don't like a lot of fun'. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I don't write very often, but I have to write during exams as part of my studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to be more specific about why you like writing a diary.

Ejemplo: I like to write in my personal diary because it helps me remember important events and express my emotions, which also improves my writing skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your idea logically. Also, avoid filler words like 'Oh really?'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will improve if I practice daily because I am not a professional writer yet.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more fluent by avoiding repeated phrases and using linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my writing skills and prevents eyestrain from looking at screens.

× I don't like a lot of fun, but I have to write when I have exam, so it's like I don't have any other option.

✓ I don't like a lot of fun, but I have to write when I have an exam, so it's like I don't have any other option.

The word 'exam' is singular and requires an article 'an' before it to be grammatically correct. Without the article, the sentence is incomplete and incorrect.

× I don't like a lot of fun, but I have to write when I have exam, so it's like I don't have any other option.

✓ I don't like a lot of fun, but I have to write when I have an exam, so it's like I don't have any other option.

The phrase 'have exam' is incorrect; it should be 'have an exam' because 'exam' is a countable noun and needs an article before it.

× So yeah, I have to write as a student.

✓ So yeah, I have to write as a student.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error here.

× What do you like to write? Why? Student: I don't write often but if I have to write then I guess it would be my personal diary as it also creates memory and it has some emotions also as well as it will improve my writing skills.

✓ I don't write often but if I have to write, then I guess it would be my personal diary as it also creates memories and has some emotions as well as improving my writing skills.

The word 'memory' should be plural 'memories' because diaries usually contain multiple memories. Also, 'it has some emotions also as well as it will improve' is awkward; better to say 'has some emotions as well as improving' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't write often but if I have to write then I guess it would be my personal diary as it also creates memory and it has some emotions also as well as it will improve my writing skills.

✓ I don't write often, but if I have to write, then I guess it would be my personal diary as it also creates memories and has some emotions as well as improving my writing skills.

Commas are needed before 'but' and 'then' to separate clauses properly. Also, the conjunctions and sentence structure need adjustment for clarity.

× Oh really? Yes, I believe it's writing will change as if I practice daily by writing as I'm not. Professional in writing, so if I write daily, I believe my writing will improve.

✓ Oh really? Yes, I believe my writing will change if I practice daily because I am not a professional writer. So, if I write daily, I believe my writing will improve.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It's writing' is incorrect; it should be 'my writing'. The phrase 'as if I practice daily by writing as I'm not. Professional in writing' is grammatically incorrect and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Oh really? Yes, I believe it's writing will change as if I practice daily by writing as I'm not. Professional in writing, so if I write daily, I believe my writing will improve.

✓ Oh really? Yes, I believe my writing will change if I practice daily because I am not a professional writer. So, if I write daily, I believe my writing will improve.

The pronoun 'it's' is incorrect here; it should be 'my' to correctly refer to the student's writing.

× I prefer handwriting as it allows me to improve my writing skills also and I will not get like my I will not get eyestrain by using. Screen.

✓ I prefer handwriting as it allows me to improve my writing skills and I will not get eyestrain by using a screen.

The phrase 'by using. Screen' is incorrect; it should be 'by using a screen'. Also, 'like my I will not get' is redundant and confusing, so it is removed for clarity.