Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and shows feelings, but it is repetitive, incomplete at the end, and slightly disorganized. To improve, give a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea (e.g., 'brightens my room' twice), finish your thought, and add one specific detail or short example. Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers and I often keep them in my bedroom because they add color and a pleasant scent. For example, I like lavender for its purple flowers and refreshing fragrance, which helps me relax. When guests visit, they often compliment the flowers, so they also make my room feel more welcoming.

Sugerencia: The answer gives background but is long-winded and partially unfinished. Improve by starting with a direct statement, then briefly support it with a specific reason or short anecdote, using a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases (e.g., 'growing up' twice) and correct grammar (plural/singular). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people I know enjoy flowers, especially my family. For instance, my mother always tended a colorful garden when I was a child, so most of us developed an appreciation for flowers early on.

Sugerencia: Your answer tries to describe variety but has several errors (word choice, grammar, unclear phrases like 'a biscuits' and 'her home'). Improve by giving a clear topic sentence about the abundance, then list 2–3 common types correctly, and add a short reason. Use linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, people grow roses, lavender and marigolds in home gardens, which are popular because they add color and are used for special occasions.

Sugerencia: This answer is natural and personal but a little repetitive ('wallpaper' and 'brighten' used twice). Improve by stating the habit, giving a brief reason and an example of when you take photos. Keep it concise and use a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers and sometimes use them as my phone wallpaper because they look cheerful. For example, I usually photograph flowers in the park during my morning walk.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar issues and redundancy. Improve by giving a clear opening sentence about when flowers are commonly sent, then add one or two concrete occasions (e.g., weddings, funerals) and a reason. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repeating words like 'always'.

Ejemplo: Yes, people here often send flowers for weddings and other celebrations. Flowers are seen as a polite and thoughtful gift because they express appreciation and make events more festive.

× Yes, I really enjoy having flowers in my home, most especially my room because of its color and its fragrance and the fact that it brightens up my room.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy having flowers in my home, especially in my room because of their color and fragrance and the fact that they brighten up the room.

Pronoun 'its' is incorrect because plural noun 'flowers' requires plural pronouns 'their' and 'they'. Also 'most especially my room' is wordy; 'especially in my room' is clearer. Use consistent reference: 'the room' instead of repeating 'my room' to avoid redundancy.

× I especially like lavender because of its purple colour and the refreshing scent it gives to my room.

✓ I especially like lavender because of its purple colour and the refreshing scent it gives the room.

Repeating 'my room' is redundant after previous sentence. Not a grammatical error but improves cohesion. 'It gives the room' is concise and maintains correct pronoun reference to the plant.

× And each time I have people come around, one thing that captivates my heart is.

✓ And each time I have people come around, one thing that captivates my heart is seeing flowers on display.

Original is an incomplete sentence lacking a clear object or clause; it's sentence structure error. Complete the sentence by specifying what captivates the speaker: 'seeing flowers on display'.

× Everyone around me loves flowers it's very unusual for me to see someone who doesn't love flower because growing up my mom usually makes sure there is flowers in our garden and that is one of the of the plants she likes to grow while growing up and it's really.

✓ Everyone around me loves flowers; it's very unusual for me to see someone who doesn't love flowers because when I was growing up my mom usually made sure there were flowers in our garden, and that was one of the plants she liked to grow.

Multiple issues: 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match context (subject-verb agreement). Run-on sentence needs punctuation. Tense consistency: 'growing up' narrative requires past tense 'was' and 'made sure' and 'were'. Remove redundant phrases 'while growing up' and trailing 'it's really' which is incomplete.

× We have so many plans and one of it is different kind of flowers ranging from rose to lavender to a biscuits because of their beauty and the fact that they brighten up her home and they make her garden more beautiful and they are very good for occasion.

✓ We have so many plants and one of them is different kinds of flowers ranging from roses to lavender to hibiscus because of their beauty; they brighten up the home, make the garden more beautiful, and are great for occasions.

Multiple pluralization errors: 'plans' should be 'plants' (spelling), 'one of it' should be 'one of them', 'different kind' should be 'different kinds', 'rose' plural 'roses', 'a biscuits' incorrect — likely 'hibiscus' singular/plural depends but here included as a kind. Pronoun 'her home' unclear; use 'the home'. Also 'for occasion' -> 'for occasions'. Correcting ensures noun-pronoun agreement and correct plurals.

× Absolutely, and one of the thing I love to use as my wallpaper is flowery plants because they just brighten my wallpaper and I just like looking at the pictures of flowers.

✓ Absolutely, and one of the things I love to use as my wallpaper is pictures of flowers because they brighten my screen, and I like looking at them.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'one of the'. 'Flowery plants' cannot be 'used as wallpaper'—more natural is 'pictures of flowers'. Avoid repeating 'wallpaper' and 'just'; use 'screen' or 'wallpaper' once. 'I just like looking at the pictures' simplified to 'I like looking at them'. Also pronoun 'them' matches plural 'pictures'.

× Flowers is considered one of the things that makes people feel refreshing and appreciated, especially when there is a wedding.

✓ Flowers are considered one of the things that make people feel refreshed and appreciated, especially at weddings.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Flowers' is plural and requires 'are' not 'is'. 'That makes' should be 'that make' to agree with plural 'things'. 'Feel refreshing' is incorrect collocation; correct is 'feel refreshed'. 'When there is a wedding' more natural as 'at weddings'.

× It's always most of the gifts we give it to each other is always flowers and they are very much appreciated where I'm from.

✓ Most gifts we give each other are flowers, and they are much appreciated where I'm from.

Original is a run-on with awkward tense and extra words ('it's always', 'is always', 'we give it to each other'). Simplify to clear subject-verb agreement: 'Most gifts we give each other are flowers'. Remove redundancy 'always' and correct order.