Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and fix tense/structure errors (e.g., 'I love flowers, especially when I receive them on special occasions such as my graduation, birthday or wedding — they help me feel relaxed').

Ejemplo: I love flowers. I especially enjoy receiving them on special occasions like my graduation, birthday or wedding because their colours and scent help me relax.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and complete the final clause. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Ejemplo: Yes — my mother loves flowers as much as I do. For example, she visits the park every morning to take photos of different blooms, and she often shares those pictures with our family.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific details. Avoid hesitation and unclear words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'flower market' and location), and combine sentences for fluency: topic sentence + one specific example of where to buy flowers.

Ejemplo: No, there are not many flowers near my apartment in Bangkok. If I want sunflowers I have to travel to the city flower market, which is quite far from my home.

Sugerencia: Make a natural, concise reply and correct grammar: use adverbs and verb forms correctly. Be specific about frequency and purpose, and use linking words like 'so' or 'because'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I come across them because I like to share their colours and beauty with my family and close friends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear general statement then one or two specific examples. Fix grammar and finish the thought. Use linking words like 'for example' and avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, people usually send flowers for special occasions, especially on Valentine's Day. For example, many women receive bouquets from their partners on that day.

× I do love flowers so much especially I get it on special occasion such as on my graduation days, birthday or my wedding day is help me to feel relaxed.

✓ I do love flowers so much, especially when I get them on special occasions such as my graduation day, my birthday, or my wedding day; they help me feel relaxed.

Pronoun and number errors: 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'. Singular/plural and article issues: 'special occasion' should be 'special occasions' and days should be singular when listed individually ('my graduation day', 'my birthday', 'my wedding day'). Verb form and sentence structure: 'is help me to feel relaxed' is ungrammatical; use 'they help me feel relaxed'. Also add commas and 'when' to connect clauses for clarity.

× If I have to say about person who love flower as much as me, I would too talk about my mom.

✓ If I had to talk about a person who loves flowers as much as I do, I would talk about my mom.

Tense and modal phrasing: use past conditional 'If I had to talk' (or 'If I were to talk') to match hypothetical. Article and number: 'a person' needed, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Subject-verb agreement: 'who loves' (third person singular). Pronoun phrasing: 'as much as I do' is the correct comparison. Remove extraneous 'too' or place it correctly.

× She love flowers so much and she's always taking photo of flower everyday when she go to the park in the morning and send to the.

✓ She loves flowers so much, and she's always taking photos of flowers every day when she goes to the park in the morning and sending them to us.

Subject-verb agreement: 'She loves' and 'she goes' need third person singular '-s'. Plural forms: 'photos' and 'flowers' plural. Adverb placement and word choice: 'every day' (two words) and 'sending them to us' completes the sentence instead of leaving 'to the' incomplete.

× Not at all. I live in the capital city of Thailand. There is no flower around my apartment.

✓ Not at all. I live in the capital city of Thailand. There are no flowers around my apartment.

There be and number: Use 'There are' for plural 'flowers' instead of singular 'There is'. Also plural 'flowers' matches context. 'Around my apartment' is fine.

× When I have to buy sunflower, I have to go to the Fargo.

✓ When I have to buy sunflowers, I have to go to the flower market.

Article and noun choice: 'sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' or 'a sunflower' depending on meaning; here plural fits. 'the Fargo' is incorrect and unclear; likely 'the flower market' or a place name. Replace with 'the flower market'.

× Uh, flower market is quite far from my.

✓ Uh, the flower market is quite far from my apartment.

Article and sentence completion: Add the definite article 'the' before 'flower market' and complete the phrase 'from my apartment' instead of leaving it unfinished as 'from my'.

× Of course, every time I see flowers by accidentally, I always taking photo of flowers and always send to my close friend and my family to share their colour and beautifulness.

✓ Of course, whenever I see flowers by accident, I always take photos of them and send them to my close friends and family to share their colors and beauty.

Adverb and phrase choice: 'by accidentally' is incorrect; use 'by accident' or 'accidentally' with proper placement. Verb form: after 'I always' use base form 'take', not 'taking'. Plural and pronoun: 'photos of them' and 'close friends' plural. Word choice: 'colour' to 'colors' (US) or 'colour' (UK) consistent; 'beautifulness' is nonstandard — use 'beauty'. Also 'whenever' or 'every time' improves flow.

× In my country people usually send flower to other on special occasion especially on Valentine's Day.

✓ In my country, people usually send flowers to others on special occasions, especially on Valentine's Day.

Articles and plural: 'send flowers' plural, 'to others' (plural), 'on special occasions' plural. Commas improve readability. 'People' requires a comma after introductory phrase.

× You can see many girls who their own flowers and bouquet of flowers and I think in.

✓ You can see many girls who have their own flowers and bouquets of flowers, and I think so.

Pronoun and verb: 'who their own flowers' is missing the verb 'have'. Plural form 'bouquets' for multiple bouquets. Sentence ending was incomplete; adding 'and I think so' or completing the thought fixes it.