Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: In your answer, try to be more clear and natural. Avoid confusing phrases like '2 leaves' and 'we don't have to live'. Use simple, correct sentences and explain your ideas logically. For example, say what your favorite flower is and why you like it, and mention that you see flowers on social media because they are not common in your country.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really love flowers. My favorite flower is the rose because it looks beautiful and smells nice. However, in my country, flowers are not very common, so I often see pictures of flowers on social media.

Sugerencia: Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural. Use correct grammar, for example, 'I don't know anyone who loves flowers'. Also, explain reasons clearly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I don't know anyone who loves flowers. People around me don't like flowers because there are very few flowers where we live, so they don't pay much attention to them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct answer first, then add details with linking words. Use correct singular/plural forms and avoid repeating the same sentence.

Ejemplo: No, there are not many flowers where I live. I live in the countryside, but unfortunately, flowers are rare in my area.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Try to answer directly whether you take photos of flowers or not. If you do, explain when or why. Use simple and correct sentences without unnecessary words.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life because there are not many flowers around me. But sometimes, I look at flower photos on the internet.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using smoother linking words and clearer sentences. Avoid repeating words like 'people' too much. Also, use correct tense and plural forms.

Ejemplo: It depends on the area. People living in the city often send flowers to each other because many of them are wealthy. However, in the countryside where I live, people usually do not send flowers to others.

× my favorite flower is 2 leaves

✓ my favorite flower has 2 leaves

The phrase 'my favorite flower is 2 leaves' incorrectly uses 'is' with a plural noun phrase '2 leaves'. The subject should describe the flower, so 'has 2 leaves' is correct to indicate the flower possesses two leaves.

× in my countries we don't have to live

✓ in my country we don't have flowers

The phrase 'in my countries' is incorrect because 'countries' is plural but the context suggests a single country. Also, 'we don't have to live' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'we don't have flowers' to match the context.

× I really love to live because I see it on a social media

✓ I really love to live because I see it on social media

The phrase 'on a social media' is incorrect because 'social media' is uncountable and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'love to live' is unclear; likely intended 'love to look at' or 'love flowers because I see them on social media'.

× No, I don't know anyone who love flowers

✓ No, I don't know anyone who loves flowers

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'anyone' which is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' to agree in number.

× everyone around me, they don't love flowers

✓ everyone around me doesn't love flowers

'Everyone' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'doesn't love'. Also, 'everyone' and 'they' together is redundant.

× because the place that I live doesn't have flowers and like they don't care about flower

✓ because the place where I live doesn't have flowers and they don't care about flowers

The correct preposition is 'where' for location. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× No, the place where I live doesn't have a flower

✓ No, the place where I live doesn't have flowers

'Flowers' should be plural to indicate the general absence of flowers, not just one flower.

× I live actually I live in countryside but that doesn't have a flower

✓ Actually, I live in the countryside but it doesn't have flowers

The sentence is repetitive and lacks articles. 'In countryside' should be 'in the countryside'. Also, 'that' should be 'it' referring to the place.

× I didn't know, but it doesn't have a flower

✓ I didn't know, but it doesn't have flowers

Same as before, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to indicate general absence.

× I don't take flowers in my diary loops

✓ I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life

'Diary loops' is incorrect; likely intended 'daily life'. Also, 'take flowers' is incorrect; should be 'take photos of flowers'.

× I usually sell a photo on Safari or Google or Samsung media

✓ I usually save photos on Safari, Google, or Samsung media

'Sell a photo' is likely incorrect; probably meant 'save photos'. Also, 'on Safari or Google or Samsung media' is awkward; listing platforms with commas is better.

× Yes, I sell it to my Like my Portal album

✓ Yes, I save them to my personal album

'Sell it to my Like my Portal album' is unclear and incorrect. Likely meant 'save them to my personal album'. Pronouns and nouns should be clear and consistent.

× If people live in a people living in the city, yes

✓ If people live in the city, yes

The phrase 'a people living in the city' is redundant and incorrect. 'People' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× the city has a lot of rich people

✓ the city has many rich people

'A lot of' is informal; 'many' is more appropriate in formal speech. However, 'a lot of' is acceptable in spoken English.

× my place people didn't send flowers to each other

✓ people in my place don't send flowers to each other

The context is present habitual action, so present tense 'don't send' is correct instead of past 'didn't send'.