Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应注意语法正确性和表达的自然流畅。比如“there are lot of flowers”应为“there are a lot of flowers”。同时，回答可以更具体，说明喜欢花的原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up my home. On the roof of my house, there are a lot of colorful flowers that my family takes care of.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“grandpa love”应为“grandpa loves”，“grounded by her”应为“planted by her”。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers very much. She planted all the flowers on our roof. Every morning, she takes them outside to get sunlight and brings them back inside at night.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和拼写错误，如“growled”应为“grown”。建议避免重复表达，并使用正确的词汇。

Ejemplo: Yes, as I mentioned, my grandmother grows many flowers on our roof. Besides that, my neighborhood is also full of beautiful flowers.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达自己的观点，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: I enjoy taking photos of flowers in my daily life. I think beautiful flowers can make people feel happy and relaxed.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“dating festival”应为“Valentine's Day”，并且“buy flowers in the home”表达不准确。建议使用正确的节日名称和表达方式。

Ejemplo: Yes, during festivals like the Spring Festival or Valentine's Day, people often buy flowers to decorate their homes or send them to friends.

× Yes, I like flowers and in the roof of my house there are lot of flowers.

✓ Yes, I like flowers and on the roof of my house there are lots of flowers.

这里“lot of flowers”缺少复数形式，应为“lots of flowers”。另外，介词应为“on the roof”而不是“in the roof”，因为花是在屋顶上。

× I know that my grandpa love flowers very much.

✓ I know that my grandpa loves flowers very much.

主语是第三人称单数“my grandpa”，动词应加-s，变为“loves”。

× The flowers on my house roof are all grounded by her.

✓ The flowers on my house roof are all planted by her.

“grounded”用法错误，应使用“planted”表示“种植”。另外，“her”指代不明，建议改为“my grandma”。

× Every morning she puts the she brought these flowers outside for the sunlight and in the night she bring in.

✓ Every morning she puts the flowers she brought outside for the sunlight and at night she brings them in.

句子中“she bring”应为第三人称单数“she brings”，且“the she brought these flowers”结构混乱，应简化为“the flowers she brought”。“in the night”应改为“at night”。

× Yes, I have just said that on the on the roof of my house there are lots of flowers growled by my grandma and my neighborhood has a lot of flowers as well.

✓ Yes, I have just said that on the roof of my house there are lots of flowers grown by my grandma and my neighborhood has a lot of flowers as well.

“growled”是错误的词，应为“grown”，表示“被种植”。

× Though in China, always old people like to take the photos of flowers.

✓ Though in China, old people always like to take photos of flowers.

“always”位置错误，应放在主语后面。且“the photos of flowers”中“the”不必要，改为“photos of flowers”。

× I really like it because I I think if you say the flowers, the beautiful flowers in front of you or in your photos, that will make you feel brilliant and comfortable.

✓ I really like it because I think if you see the beautiful flowers in front of you or in your photos, it will make you feel happy and comfortable.

句子中重复“I I”，应删除一个。表达“say the flowers”不合适，应为“see the flowers”。“brilliant”用词不当，改为“happy”。

× Yes, in some festivals like Spring Festival or the dating festival, we buy flowers in the home or send it to the friends.

✓ Yes, in some festivals like the Spring Festival or the Valentine's Day, we buy flowers at home or send them to friends.

“in the home”应为“at home”，“the dating festival”应为“Valentine's Day”。“send it to the friends”中“it”应为复数“them”，“the friends”应去掉定冠词。