Flowers— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you love flowers?
Candidato
Yes, of course I like flowers. Every day I also like to buy some flowers and put them in my vast vase. By seeing them I can put myself in a high spirits.
Examinador
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Candidato
Actually, it must be myself. I prefer to making flowers by myself with some special materials such as the clothes, the.
Examinador
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Candidato
Actually not. Because I live in a city, there are not many space for flowers to be planted. The place I mostly see flowers must be my home or the flower shop near my home.
Examinador
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Candidato
Yes I do. By taking different types of flowers I think I can improve my sense of beauty. And also after that when I see the photos I have token I can find the.
Examinador
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Candidato
No, I think because compared with the western country, people in China usually send flowers only in birthday or some festivals, so it may actually only occur in some special occasions.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“put myself in a high spirits”应为“put myself in high spirits”，并且回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗余。
Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I often buy fresh flowers and put them in a big vase at home because they always lift my mood.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰且有语法错误，如“prefer to making”应为“prefer making”，且句子未完成，建议回答时表达完整且语法正确。
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. In fact, I enjoy making artificial flowers myself using special materials like fabric and wire.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“not many space”应为“not much space”，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: Not really, because I live in a city where there isn’t much space for planting flowers. Mostly, I see flowers at my home or in the nearby flower shop.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如“photos I have token”应为“photos I have taken”，建议回答时完整表达观点并注意语法。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of various flowers because it helps me appreciate their beauty. Later, I enjoy looking at these pictures to relax.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答较好，但“western country”应为“Western countries”，且句子可以更简洁自然。
Ejemplo: No, people in China usually send flowers only on special occasions like birthdays or festivals, unlike in Western countries where it is more common.
Gramática
× Actually, it must be myself. I prefer to making flowers by myself with some special materials such as the clothes, the.
✓ Actually, it must be myself. I prefer to make flowers by myself with some special materials such as clothes.
动词prefer后面接动词不定式to do，而不是动名词making。这里应使用不定式形式make。
× Because I live in a city, there are not many space for flowers to be planted.
✓ Because I live in a city, there is not much space for flowers to be planted.
space是不可数名词，不能用复数形式many space，应使用much space。
× And also after that when I see the photos I have token I can find the.
✓ And also after that when I see the photos I have taken, I can find them.
动词take的过去分词是taken，不是token。这里应使用过去分词taken。
× people in China usually send flowers only in birthday or some festivals, so it may actually only occur in some special occasions.
✓ people in China usually send flowers only on birthdays or some festivals, so it may actually only occur on some special occasions.
birthday应使用复数形式birthdays，表示多个生日；同时介词应为on birthdays。
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