Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ như 'they are also have' nên sửa thành 'they also have'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really love flowers, especially roses. They symbolize love and passion, and their bright colors always catch my eye. For example, whenever I receive a bouquet of roses, it instantly brightens my mood and makes me happy.

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như 'she especially roses' nên là 'she especially loves roses' và 'she enjoyed' nên dùng thì hiện tại tiếp diễn hoặc hiện tại đơn để phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Hãy chú ý dùng thì đúng và câu trả lời nên mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Oh yes, my mom is very passionate about flowers, especially roses. She has a beautiful flower garden at home and spends every afternoon carefully taking care of it. For example, she enjoys nurturing different kinds of flowers and watching them bloom throughout the season.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'well known for its brand' không phù hợp, có thể là 'well known for its beautiful and diverse flowers'. Câu cuối cùng bị bỏ dở, bạn nên hoàn thành ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I live in a village that is well known for its beautiful and diverse flowers such as roses, tulips, and sunflowers. Because of this, I have developed a strong passion for flowers and gardening. For instance, I often spend my free time tending to my own small garden.

Sugerencia: Bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'taking 4 pictures' nên là 'taking photos' và 'some photo of cherry' nên là 'some photos of cherry blossoms'. Hãy chú ý dùng số nhiều đúng và hoàn chỉnh câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Well, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I prefer to enjoy their beauty with my own eyes. However, I think taking photos is a great way to capture memories, especially when I see rare or unique flowers during special occasions. For example, last spring I took some photos of cherry blossoms.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng có lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'good graces' nên là 'good wishes' hoặc 'good luck', 'Ted holiday' có thể là 'Tet holiday', và 'buy flowers to degrade their homes' nên là 'buy flowers to decorate their homes'. Câu cuối cùng bị bỏ dở, bạn nên hoàn chỉnh ý để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, people in Vietnam often send flowers to others because flowers are not only a popular gift but also symbolize good wishes and happiness. For instance, during Tet holiday, many families buy flowers to decorate their homes, making them look festive and welcoming.

× They not only symbolize love and passion, but they are also have bright colors and delicate birds always catch my eye.

✓ They not only symbolize love and passion, but they also have bright colors and delicate beauty that always catches my eye.

The phrase 'are also have' is incorrect because 'have' should not be preceded by 'are' here. The correct structure is 'they also have'. Additionally, 'delicate birds' seems contextually incorrect; it should be 'delicate beauty' or similar to fit the meaning. The verb 'catches' agrees with the singular subject 'delicate beauty'.

× For example, whenever I receive a bouquet of roses, it's instantly brightens my mood and makes me feel happy.

✓ For example, whenever I receive a bouquet of roses, it instantly brightens my mood and makes me feel happy.

The phrase 'it's instantly brightens' is incorrect because 'it' and 'brightens' are both subjects and verbs; 'it's' (it is) should be replaced with 'it' to correctly pair with the verb 'brightens'.

× She especially roses.

✓ She especially loves roses.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'loves' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× For example, she enjoyed nurturing different kinds of flower and watching them bloom throughout the season.

✓ For example, she enjoys nurturing different kinds of flowers and watching them bloom throughout the season.

The verb 'enjoyed' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'enjoys' is appropriate. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'different kinds of'.

× She enjoyed nurturing different kinds of flower and watching them bloom throughout the season.

✓ She enjoys nurturing different kinds of flowers and watching them bloom throughout the season.

The phrase 'different kinds of flower' should use the plural 'flowers' because 'kinds' implies multiple types, so the noun should be plural.

× I live in a village that is well known for its brand and diverse flowers such as rose, tulips and sunflowers.

✓ I live in a village that is well known for its brand and diverse flowers such as roses, tulips, and sunflowers.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' to match the plural 'tulips' and 'sunflowers' in the list.

× Because of it, I have developed a strong passion for flowers and gardening. For instance, I often spend my time on.

✓ Because of it, I have developed a strong passion for flowers and gardening. For instance, I often spend my time gardening.

The sentence 'I often spend my time on.' is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'gardening' completes the sentence and clarifies the activity.

× However, I think taking 4 pictures is a great way to capture memories, especially when I see rare or unique flowers during special occasion.

✓ However, I think taking four pictures is a great way to capture memories, especially when I see rare or unique flowers during special occasions.

Numbers under ten should be written in words ('four'). Also, 'special occasion' should be plural 'special occasions' to match the general context.

× For example, last spring I took some photo of cherry.

✓ For example, last spring I took some photos of cherry blossoms.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' because of 'some'. Also, 'cherry' is incomplete; 'cherry blossoms' is the correct term.

× Yes, people in Vietnam often send flowers to others because flowers are not only a popular gift but also symbolize good graces and happiness.

✓ Yes, people in Vietnam often send flowers to others because flowers are not only a popular gift but also symbolize good wishes and happiness.

The phrase 'good graces' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'good wishes' to express positive sentiments.

× For instance, during Ted holiday, many families buy flowers to degrade their homes, making their homes look.

✓ For instance, during Tet holiday, many families buy flowers to decorate their homes, making their homes look beautiful.

'Ted holiday' is a typo; it should be 'Tet holiday'. 'Degrade' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'decorate'. The sentence is incomplete and needs 'beautiful' to complete the thought.