Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid using words like 'Suddenly' which do not fit the context. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and use more natural phrasing. For example, say 'I really adore flowers because they symbolize relationships and friendship.' Keep sentences clear and concise.

Ejemplo: I really adore flowers because they symbolize relationships and friendship. Moreover, they decorate our homes beautifully and create a pleasant atmosphere. For example, placing fresh flowers in the living room instantly brightens up the space.

Sugerencia: Focus on correct grammar, such as plural forms and verb tenses. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'There are many people I know who love flowers, but my sister loves them the most. She has decorated her room with flowers of different colours like red, yellow, and pink. She waters the plants every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.'

Ejemplo: There are many people I know who love flowers, but my sister loves them the most. She has decorated her room with flowers of different colours like red, yellow, and pink. She waters the plants every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

Sugerencia: Avoid irrelevant or confusing words like 'Suddenly' and unclear phrases. Use correct sentence structure and linking words. For example, say 'I come from a small village where my house is near a field. There are many flowers of different colours such as red, pink, yellow, and white. They look very attractive, and I enjoy watching them every day.'

Ejemplo: I come from a small village where my house is near a field. There are many flowers of different colours such as red, pink, yellow, and white. They look very attractive, and I enjoy watching them every day.

Sugerencia: Use more natural expressions and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I use Snapchat. I prefer to share snaps of red flowers because red is my favourite colour.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I use Snapchat. I prefer to share snaps of red flowers because red is my favourite colour.

Sugerencia: Clarify and organise your ideas with linking words. Use correct phrases for occasions. For example, say 'Definitely. People in my country often send flowers on various occasions such as birthdays, wedding anniversaries, and professional events. They also send flowers to celebrate retirements and job promotions.'

Ejemplo: Definitely. People in my country often send flowers on various occasions such as birthdays, wedding anniversaries, and professional events. They also send flowers to celebrate retirements and job promotions.

× Moreover, they have to decorate our homes beautifully and create a pleasant atmosphere.

✓ Moreover, they help decorate our homes beautifully and create a pleasant atmosphere.

The phrase 'have to' implies obligation which is incorrect here. Flowers do not have an obligation; instead, they contribute to decoration. Using 'help' correctly expresses this meaning.

× For example, placing the fresh flowers in living room instantly brightens up the space.

✓ For example, placing fresh flowers in the living room instantly brightens up the space.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'living room' to specify the particular room. Also, 'fresh flowers' does not need 'the' here as it is general.

× There are number of people I know who loves flower a lot but my sister is one of them who loves flower very much.

✓ There are a number of people I know who love flowers a lot but my sister is one of them who loves flowers very much.

The phrase 'a number of' requires the plural verb 'love'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× She has decorated her room with different types of flower like red, yellow and pink color.

✓ She has decorated her room with different types of flowers like red, yellow and pink colors.

'Types' is plural, so 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Also, 'color' should be plural 'colors' to match the list.

× She makes sure to watering plants flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

✓ She makes sure to water the plants and flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

The verb after 'makes sure to' should be in base form 'water'. Also, 'plants flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'the plants and flowers'.

× Suddenly I come from a small village and my house is building a field and there are a number of flowers in different types of color like red, pink, yellow, white etcetera and the flowers are looking very attractive and I watching flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant and looking.

✓ I come from a small village and my house is near a field where there are a number of flowers of different colors like red, pink, yellow, and white. The flowers look very attractive and I watch them every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and awkward phrasing. 'Suddenly' is unnecessary. 'My house is building a field' is incorrect; it should be 'my house is near a field'. 'Different types of color' should be 'different colors'. 'I watching' should be 'I watch'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× Definitely, I get more preference to take photos with flowers while I'm using Snapchat.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to take photos with flowers while I'm using Snapchat.

'Get more preference' is incorrect usage. The correct expression is 'prefer to' when expressing liking or choice.

× I give more preference to send Snapchat snap of red color flowers because red is my favorite color.

✓ I prefer to send Snapchat snaps of red flowers because red is my favorite color.

'Give more preference to send' is incorrect; 'prefer to send' is correct. 'Snapchat snap' should be plural 'snaps' if general. 'Red color flowers' should be 'red flowers'.

× People in my country often send flowers to others on different types of occasions like birthday parties, marriage anniversaries on the spectrum, professional days.

✓ People in my country often send flowers to others on different types of occasions like birthday parties, marriage anniversaries, and professional days.

The phrase 'on the spectrum' is incorrect and unnecessary here. Also, 'different types of occasions' is acceptable but listing them clearly with commas and 'and' improves clarity.

× They send flowers to others on their retirement, on their job party.

✓ They send flowers to others on their retirement and at their job parties.

'On their retirement' is correct, but 'on their job party' is incorrect; it should be 'at their job parties'. Also, plural 'parties' fits better for general occasions.