Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally good but the word "Suddenly" at the beginning is unnatural in this context. Try to start directly with your opinion. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much because they come in a variety of vibrant colors like red, yellow, and pink. Moreover, flowers brighten up our homes and create a pleasant atmosphere. For instance, having fresh flowers around can improve my mood and make the environment more welcoming.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add a little more specific detail about why your mother enjoys flowers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I know many people who love flowers, especially my mother. She has more than 100 flower pots and decorates both her house and room with them. She waters and nurtures the flowers every day because she finds it very relaxing and enjoys seeing them healthy and vibrant.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to correct these and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in an urban area with few gardens nearby. However, my mother has many flower pots, so we do have flowers at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases like "Bluesome I". Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your points.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life, especially when I use Snapchat. I prefer to share pictures of red blossoms because they are my favourite.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear parts, such as "book bookcase" which seems incorrect. Try to avoid such errors and be more specific. Also, use linking words to improve flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, people in my country often give flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, anniversaries, and professional events such as retirements or promotions. Nowadays, many people also prefer giving plants as gifts instead of flowers.

× Suddenly, I love flowers very much, especially because they come in a variety of vibrant colors like red, yellow, and pink.

✓ I love flowers very much, especially because they come in a variety of vibrant colors like red, yellow, and pink.

The word 'Suddenly' is incorrectly used here as it implies an abrupt change which is not appropriate in this context. The sentence should start directly with 'I love flowers very much' to correctly express the present tense feeling.

× However, my mother has a lot flower pots so I there are flowers at our home.

✓ However, my mother has a lot of flower pots so there are flowers at our home.

The phrase 'a lot flower pots' is missing the preposition 'of' which is necessary to correctly quantify plural nouns. Also, the phrase 'I there are flowers' is incorrect and should be 'there are flowers' to maintain proper sentence structure.

× Certainly I take photos of flowers in my daily life while I'm using Snapchat.

✓ Certainly, I take photos of flowers in my daily life while using Snapchat.

The phrase 'while I'm using Snapchat' is grammatically correct but can be simplified to 'while using Snapchat' for smoother and more natural expression. Also, a comma after 'Certainly' improves readability.

× I give more preference to send the photos of Bluesome I.

✓ I prefer to send photos of blue blossoms.

The phrase 'I give more preference to send' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I prefer to send'. Also, 'Bluesome I' seems to be a typo or mispronunciation and should be 'blue blossoms'.

× Oh, and red blossoms are my favorite blossoms, so I give more preference to send the pic of red blossoms.

✓ Oh, and red blossoms are my favorite, so I prefer to send pictures of red blossoms.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'I give more preference to send' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'I prefer to send'. Also, 'pic' should be pluralized to 'pictures' for generality and formality.

× Yes, people in my country often give flowers and book bookcase on special occasions like birthdays, weddings and anniversaries and even professional events like retirement or promotion.

✓ Yes, people in my country often give flowers and books on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, anniversaries, and even professional events like retirement or promotion.

The phrase 'book bookcase' is incorrect and likely a typo. It should be 'books'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in the list for clarity.

× Nowadays, people have also started keeping plants as gift instead of flowers.

✓ Nowadays, people have also started giving plants as gifts instead of flowers.

The phrase 'keeping plants as gift' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'giving plants as gifts'. 'Keeping' implies retaining rather than giving, and 'gift' should be pluralized to 'gifts' to match the context.