Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some language errors, such as 'wear light flowers' instead of 'grow flowers'. Try to use clear and correct vocabulary and complete your sentences. Also, avoid redundancy and finish your thoughts fully. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Actually, I don't grow flowers even though they look beautiful. I find them difficult to take care of because they require a lot of attention. For example, I often forget to water them regularly, which makes it hard to keep them healthy.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'girls are someone who love flowers'. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. Generally, girls like to receive flowers on Valentine's Day because it is a meaningful way for boys to show their love and affection.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides relevant information but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as 'my parents like to planting'. Try to use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, organise your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my parents are farmers and they plant a lot of flowers, such as roses. Also, since my home is near the mountain, I often see many wildflowers when I go outside.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains errors like 'photos of virus' instead of 'photos of flowers'. Make sure to use the correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, try to be concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: I don't often take photos of flowers because there are not many flowers where I live. Also, I haven't found any flowers that I really like, so I rarely take pictures of them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'many boyfriend that would like'. Try to use correct plural forms and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and organise your ideas logically with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on Valentine's Day. Many boyfriends like to give flowers to their girlfriends to show their love and brighten their day.

× Actually, I don't wear light flowers even though they look beautiful.

✓ Actually, I don't like light flowers even though they look beautiful.

The verb 'wear' is incorrect in this context because flowers are not worn. The correct verb is 'like' to express preference. This is a verb usage error involving the incorrect verb choice, which is not in the provided list but closely related to verb form usage.

× I found them quite difficult to take care of because they need to have a lot of attention and I often feel frustrated when trying to keep them healthy.

✓ I find them quite difficult to take care of because they need a lot of attention and I often feel frustrated when trying to keep them healthy.

The sentence uses past tense 'found' incorrectly when the context is about a general or current feeling. Present tense 'find' is appropriate here. Also, 'need to have a lot of attention' is wordy; 'need a lot of attention' is more natural.

× For example, I struggle to remember to water them regularly, which makes them.

✓ For example, I struggle to remember to water them regularly, which affects their health.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear object after 'makes them'. Adding 'affects their health' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× Generally girls are someone who love flowers because in my point of view, girls like to receive some flowers in Valentine's Day so boys can show love to them and the flowers is a significant thing for them to show their love.

✓ Generally, girls are people who love flowers because, in my point of view, girls like to receive flowers on Valentine's Day so boys can show love to them, and flowers are a significant thing for them to show their love.

'Someone' is singular and incorrect when referring to 'girls' (plural); 'people' is correct. 'The flowers is' should be 'flowers are' to agree in number. Also, 'in Valentine's Day' should be 'on Valentine's Day' (preposition correction).

× Yes, of course there are a lot of farmers where I live as my parents like to planting so they plant a lot of flowers like some roses.

✓ Yes, of course there are a lot of flowers where I live as my parents like planting, so they plant a lot of flowers like roses.

'Farmers' is incorrect; context suggests 'flowers'. 'Like to planting' is incorrect; it should be 'like planting' (verb + -ing form). 'Like some roses' is better as 'like roses' for natural expression.

× Also when I go outside I can see a lot of flowers because my living place is very near the mountain.

✓ Also, when I go outside, I can see a lot of flowers because my home is very near the mountain.

'Living place' is unnatural; 'home' is better. 'Very near the mountain' is acceptable but 'near the mountain' is sufficient. Added commas for clarity.

× I don't likely to take various photos of virus in my daily life because in my place I don't often see many flowers and I don't really find a flower that I Love Actually, so I am not likely to take a photo of some flower.

✓ I don't like to take various photos of flowers in my daily life because in my area I don't often see many flowers and I don't really find a flower that I love. Actually, so I am not likely to take a photo of any flower.

'Don't likely' is incorrect; should be 'don't like to'. 'Virus' is incorrect; should be 'flowers'. 'In my place' is better as 'in my area'. 'Love' should not be capitalised. 'Some flower' is better as 'any flower' in negative context.

× Yes, of course, when I was in the street of especially in the Valentine's Day, many boyfriend that would like to show their love and show their affection to their girlfriends, so they often send the flowers to others so that their boyfriend can brighten the girlfriend's day.

✓ Yes, of course, especially on Valentine's Day, many boyfriends like to show their love and affection to their girlfriends, so they often send flowers to them to brighten their girlfriends' day.

The sentence is awkward and contains errors: 'when I was in the street of especially in the Valentine's Day' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Many boyfriend' should be 'many boyfriends' (plural). 'Send the flowers to others so that their boyfriend can brighten the girlfriend's day' is confusing; corrected to 'send flowers to them to brighten their girlfriends' day' for clarity and agreement.