Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo sankhya ma filler shabda haru cha jastai 'umm', 'uh', jun le answer lai natural ra prabhavit banauna samasya garchha. Tapai le pratyek sentence lai spashta ra sankshep ma prastut garnu parcha. English ma 'cultural significant' ko sato 'cultural significance' bhanne prayog garnu parcha.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially marigolds because they hold cultural significance. We use them during Lakshmi Puja in the Tihar festival, which is very important in my culture.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma kehi galti haru chan, jastai 'people's' ko sato 'people' ra 'decorate in their vase' ko sato 'decorate them in vases' bhanne. Tapai le linking words jastai 'for example' ya 'also' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

Ejemplo: Yes, I know many people around me who love flowers. For example, my neighbors always plant flowers in their gardens, and my friends also enjoy receiving flowers as gifts, which they decorate in vases at home.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar dherai chhoto ra filler shabda le bharieko cha. Tapai le sentence lai thulo ra spashta banau, jasma linking words ra specific details samet hunuparcha.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many varieties of flowers available in my area. For instance, you can find roses, marigolds, and sunflowers growing in gardens nearby.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra vocabulary ma kehi galti chan, jastai 'gallery are' ko sato 'gallery is', 'different kind' ko sato 'different kinds', ra 'enlightened from my inner core of heart' ko sato 'very happy' ya 'joyful' bhanne. Tapai le sentence haru lai sankshep ra spashta banau.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. My gallery is full of different kinds of flowers. Seeing flowers makes me very happy, and I always keep the flowers I receive as gifts.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma repetition cha ('people are people are') ra grammar galti haru chan ('send' ko sato 'send', 'each others' ko sato 'each other'). Tapai le sentence haru lai ramro tarikale jodne linking words prayog garnu parcha.

Ejemplo: Yes, nowadays people often send flowers to each other. For example, when someone achieves a milestone in their career, friends send flowers to congratulate them. Also, guests usually bring flowers when they visit someone's home.

× Yes, there are variety of flowers, umm, available, uh, in the area I live.

✓ Yes, there is a variety of flowers, umm, available, uh, in the area I live.

The phrase 'a variety' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. This is a common 'There be' issue where the verb must agree with the singular noun following 'there is/are'.

× In fact, my gallery are full of different kind of flowers.

✓ In fact, my gallery is full of different kinds of flowers.

The subject 'gallery' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'different kind' should be pluralized to 'different kinds' because it refers to multiple types of flowers. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Flowers makes me very much enlightened from my inner core of heart.

✓ Flowers make me very much enlightened from my inner core of heart.

The subject 'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Whenever I get flowers as a gift, I love that and I'll usually keep in.

✓ Whenever I get flowers as a gift, I love that and I usually keep them.

The phrase 'I'll usually keep in' is incorrect. The modal verb 'will' is unnecessary here; 'usually' indicates habitual action, so simple present 'keep' is appropriate. Also, 'keep in' is incomplete; it should be 'keep them' referring to the flowers. This is a modal verb usage issue.

× Yes, I know many people's in my surrounding loves flowers as I have seen my neighbors always plant some flowers in their garden and my friends also love flowers.

✓ Yes, I know many people in my surroundings love flowers as I have seen my neighbors always plant some flowers in their garden and my friends also love flowers.

'People's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'people' plural noun. Also, 'surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings'. The verb 'loves' should be 'love' to agree with plural subject 'people'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement issue.

× Nowadays people are people are often send flowers to each others.

✓ Nowadays people often send flowers to each other.

The phrase 'are often send' is incorrect; it should be 'often send' because 'send' is the base form after 'often' (an adverb). Also, 'each others' should be 'each other' as 'each other' is reciprocal pronoun and does not take plural form. This is a subject-verb agreement and incorrect use of pronouns issue.