Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答自然且表达了个人感受，但有语法错误（fell 应为 fall），且可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they always boost my mood. Whenever I feel down, looking at flowers helps me feel better and more relaxed.

Sugerencia: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但“on her garden”应为“in her garden”，可用连接词增强连贯性。

Ejemplo: My grandma loves flowers very much because she believes they are relaxing and beautiful. Therefore, she spends a lot of time in her garden every morning.

Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富且具体，但句子间缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. My family's house has a small garden where many flowers like lilies and tulips grow. As a result, we can enjoy beautiful views throughout different seasons.

Sugerencia: “smoothing”用词不当，应为“soothing”。回答较好，但可增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is very interesting and soothing. For example, last week I took a photo of a small blue flower with yellow spots, which looked very unique in the sunlight.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且表达清晰，建议将“birthday”改为复数形式“birthdays”，并使用连接词增强连贯性。

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers as gifts because they are a thoughtful and affordable way to brighten someone's day, especially on special occasions like birthdays and festivals.

× Whenever I fell down, looking at the flowers helps me feel better.

✓ Whenever I fall down, looking at the flowers helps me feel better.

这里的句子描述的是一种习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时态，而不是过去时态。fell是过去式，应该改为fall。

× She spends a lot of time on her garden every morning.

✓ She spends a lot of time in her garden every morning.

表示在某个地方花时间，应该用介词in而不是on。on her garden是不正确的搭配。

× Yes, I think it is very interesting and smoothing.

✓ Yes, I think it is very interesting and soothing.

smoothing是动名词或现在分词，意思是“使平滑”，这里应使用形容词soothing，表示“令人舒缓的”。

× especially on some special days like birthday and festivals.

✓ especially on some special days like birthdays and festivals.

birthday是可数名词，表示“生日”，应使用复数形式birthdays，表示多个生日。