Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like "I guess" and "that's it" which sound uncertain or abrupt. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, "because" and "and". Also, try to provide more specific reasons why tulips are your favorite.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. Among them, tulips are my favorite because they look very gentle and remind me of the beauty of spring. Their bright colors always cheer me up and make me feel peaceful.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Avoid repeating words like "every time like every occasion". Use linking words such as "for example" and "so" properly. Also, try to make sentences more concise and correct grammar mistakes.

Ejemplo: Yes, for example, my chemistry teacher is a big fan of flowers. On special occasions like her birthday, my classmates and I give her roses, which are her favorite. She is always very happy to receive them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors. Avoid informal phrases like "I haven't thought about this before" in formal speaking. Also, "2 leaves" is unclear and possibly incorrect. Use linking words like "because" to explain your ideas clearly. Try to be more specific and accurate with vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my country has four seasons and diverse weather conditions. This allows various flowers such as lilies, roses, and sunflowers to grow throughout the year.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but needs clearer expression and grammar correction. Use linking words like "because" to explain reasons. Avoid awkward phrases like "look forward some flowers"; instead say "look for flowers". Also, try to be concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of flowers. Whenever I visit a park or garden, I look for beautiful flowers to photograph because I enjoy capturing their colors and shapes. Later, I can look at these photos when I feel bored.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and correct grammar. For example, say "important occasions" instead of "important occasion" and "express respect or gratitude" instead of "express their respects or some gratefulness". Use linking words like "especially" effectively.

Ejemplo: Yes, in my country, it is a tradition to send flowers to others, especially on birthdays or important occasions. People do this to express respect and gratitude.

× There are several types of flowers like roses, tulips, sunflowers but my favorite one I guess is tulips because first of all they are so gentle for me and they remind me spring nature and that's it.

✓ There are several types of flowers like roses, tulips, and sunflowers, but my favorite one, I guess, is tulips because, first of all, they are so gentle for me and they remind me of spring nature, and that's it.

The sentence lacks necessary commas before conjunctions and after introductory phrases, which makes it hard to read. Also, 'remind me spring nature' is missing the preposition 'of'. Adding commas improves clarity and corrects the sentence structure.

× we like our classmates.

✓ we, like our classmates,

The phrase 'we like our classmates' is unclear and seems to be missing context or punctuation. Adding commas clarifies that 'we' and 'our classmates' are separate entities involved in the action.

× We give her her favorite flowers which are roses and she always so happy to see them.

✓ We give her her favorite flowers, which are roses, and she is always so happy to see them.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' in 'she always so happy'. Adding commas around the relative clause improves readability.

× Like my country has Four Seasons and different weather conditions so this makes possible for a wide range of flowers to grow there, like 2 leaves, roses, sunflowers and so on.

✓ My country has four seasons and different weather conditions, so this makes it possible for a wide range of flowers to grow there, like tulips, roses, sunflowers, and so on.

'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized unless it's a proper noun. '2 leaves' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'tulips' fits the context better. Also, 'makes possible' needs the pronoun 'it' to be correct.

× I always look forward some flowers, the beautiful views of them and I'm passionate to take photos of them so I can watch them when I'm bored or I want to take pictures.

✓ I always look forward to seeing some flowers, the beautiful views of them, and I'm passionate about taking photos of them so I can look at them when I'm bored or want to take pictures.

The phrase 'look forward' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Passionate to take' should be 'passionate about taking'. Also, 'watch them' is better as 'look at them' when referring to photos.

× It makes them to express their respects or some gratefulness.

✓ It helps them express their respect or gratitude.

The phrase 'makes them to express' is incorrect; 'helps them express' or 'allows them to express' is correct. Also, 'respects' should be singular 'respect', and 'some gratefulness' is better as 'gratitude'.