Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains some errors and unclear words, such as 'flats' instead of 'flowers'. Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your sentences clear and connected.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially their vibrant colors. They always brighten my day and make me smile because of their natural beauty.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoiding short, choppy sentences. Also, try to be more concise and clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, my son loves flowers. He waters the plants regularly, and whenever a new flower blooms, he excitedly tells everyone and invites them to see it.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides relevant details but has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence and clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, in my home country, my mother-in-law is very interested in gardening. She plants many flowers, including lotus, marigold, and jasmine, which have a lovely fragrance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is detailed and relevant but could be improved by using smoother linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, whenever I see a beautiful flower, I take a photo of it, whether it's on the road or in a garden. I especially enjoy photographing roses of different colors and have collected nearly 50 pictures.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use complete sentences, and explain your points with examples.

Ejemplo: In my home country, people don't often send flowers as bouquets. Instead, they use flowers in garlands to please others during special occasions, such as festivals or ceremonies.

× I love flats, particularly I love looking at flats.

✓ I love flowers, particularly I love looking at flowers.

The word 'flats' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural noun is 'flowers'. This is a singular and plural issue where the wrong plural form or word is used.

× It. Is so pleasant to look at them.

✓ It is so pleasant to look at them.

The sentence is incorrectly split by a period, disrupting the sentence structure. It should be one continuous sentence for clarity.

× He will. Go around it and tell to everyone that there is a new flower in the garden and make everyone come and look at it.

✓ He will go around it and tell everyone that there is a new flower in the garden and make everyone come and look at it.

The period after 'will' incorrectly breaks the sentence. Also, 'tell to everyone' is incorrect; 'tell everyone' is the correct usage. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure issue.

× In my home country, my mother-in-law is. Particularly interested in growing plans, she used to plant a lot of flowers.

✓ In my home country, my mother-in-law is particularly interested in growing plants; she used to plant a lot of flowers.

The word 'plans' is a typo and should be 'plants'. Also, the sentence is incorrectly split by a period. This is a singular/plural issue and sentence structure error.

× Even she planted Lotus.

✓ She even planted lotus.

'Lotus' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'even' is better placed before the verb for natural English order. This is a singular/plural and sentence structure issue.

× Additionally, she plans flowers like Marigold and Jasmine which gives good fragrance.

✓ Additionally, she plants flowers like marigold and jasmine which give a good fragrance.

'Plans' should be 'plants' (verb). 'Marigold' and 'Jasmine' should be lowercase unless proper nouns. 'Gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural subject 'flowers'. This is a singular/plural and verb form issue.

× Whenever I look at a pleasant and a beautiful flower, I click a picture of it wherever it is, either on the road or in the garden or in someone's garden.

✓ Whenever I look at a pleasant and beautiful flower, I take a picture of it wherever it is, either on the road or in a garden or in someone's garden.

The article 'a' before 'beautiful flower' is unnecessary when 'pleasant' is also used. 'Click a picture' is informal; 'take a picture' is more appropriate. Also, 'in the garden' should be 'in a garden' for generality. This is an incorrect use of articles and quantifiers.

× And also I have a habit of clicking pictures of roses of different colors and I have collected nearly 50. Colors of rose pictures that I clicked myself.

✓ I also have a habit of taking pictures of roses of different colors, and I have collected nearly 50 pictures of roses that I took myself.

The sentence is fragmented by a period after '50'. 'Clicking pictures' should be 'taking pictures'. 'Colors of rose pictures' is awkward; better to say 'pictures of roses of different colors'. This is a singular/plural and sentence structure issue.

× In my home country, people. Don't use flowers. In bookies, but they use it in garlands when they want to. Please someone and they use it in different occasions, for example if there is a. Even most of the flowers you find in the garlands only than the bookies.

✓ In my home country, people don't use flowers in bouquets, but they use them in garlands when they want to please someone. They use flowers on different occasions; for example, most of the flowers you find are in garlands rather than bouquets.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect pronoun use ('it' instead of 'them'). 'Bookies' is a typo for 'bouquets'. The sentence structure is poor and needs correction for clarity. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure issue.