Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid unclear or incomplete phrases and keep your answer within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much because they are beautiful and colourful. For example, roses and sunflowers are my favourites. I enjoy seeing different types of flowers in gardens. Moreover, flowers always make me feel happy and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat relevant but contains incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She has planted more than ten different kinds of flowers in our home garden. In fact, she has great knowledge about various flowers, which I admire. Because of her passion, our garden is always colourful and lively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Provide a direct response first, then add specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant phrases. Keep your answer concise and focused on the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mother grows various kinds in our backyard. Whenever I walk through the garden in the morning or evening, I feel relaxed and happy. The flowers add beauty to our home environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples of your photography habits.

Ejemplo: Yes, photography is one of my hobbies. I often take photos of flowers and beautiful scenery to relieve stress. I enjoy capturing flowers from different angles. Sometimes, I share these photos on social media platforms.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and direct response, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid irrelevant words.

Ejemplo: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others on special occasions. For example, when visiting someone's home or during festivals, giving flowers is a common and thoughtful gesture. It shows respect and good wishes.

× I'm just amazed by the beauty, Carrie.

✓ I'm just amazed by the beauty.

The word 'Carrie' seems out of context and does not fit grammatically in the sentence. It should be removed to maintain sentence clarity and correctness.

× There are many flowers like roses, sunflowers, asleep, your worst I'd actually I catching an array see them.

✓ There are many flowers like roses and sunflowers; I actually enjoy seeing them.

The original sentence contains nonsensical phrases and incorrect word usage. Correcting it to a clear sentence with proper conjunctions and verb forms improves clarity and grammar.

× Moreover, I never felt bored around flowers, I can just.

✓ Moreover, I never feel bored around flowers; I can just enjoy them.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb phrase. Adding 'enjoy them' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× My mom has planted more than ten kinds of flower and my home only.

✓ My mom has planted more than ten kinds of flowers in my home only.

The plural form 'flowers' is needed to agree with 'kinds of'. Also, 'in my home only' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× She just love flowers.

✓ She just loves flowers.

In the present tense, third person singular subjects require the verb to have an 's' at the end. 'Love' should be 'loves'.

× She always, you know, income.

✓ She always, you know, encourages me.

The word 'income' is incorrect here. Likely, the intended word is 'encourages me' or a similar phrase. Correcting the verb and adding the object makes the sentence meaningful.

× Yes all my mom is the one who if you make it short, to garden different kinds of flowers around in backyard.

✓ Yes, my mom is the one who, to make it short, gardens different kinds of flowers around the backyard.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. Rearranging the phrase and correcting verb form 'gardens' improves clarity and grammar.

× So yeah, there a lot of flowers and factor.

✓ So yeah, there are a lot of flowers in the backyard.

The verb 'are' is needed for plural subject 'flowers'. 'Factor' is incorrect here; likely 'backyard' or similar is intended.

× Yes so photographie is one of my hobbies that I enjoy a lot.

✓ Yes, photography is one of my hobbies that I enjoy a lot.

The word 'photographie' is a misspelling. The correct noun is 'photography'.

× I know only take photos of scenery of the things that need stress giving us including flower.

✓ I only take photos of scenery and things that inspire us, including flowers.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. Correcting prepositions and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× Also I just love to capture the beauty through different angles and or sometimes I even do push on social media platforms to us too.

✓ Also, I just love to capture beauty from different angles, and sometimes I even post on social media platforms.

The phrase 'do push' is incorrect; 'post' is the correct verb for sharing on social media. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, special Eoin Morgan's narrow it has become we can see all primed to give oil treat someone with flowers whenever someone you know visit others home or TR please so they often make it short to give flowers.

✓ Yes, especially in Morgan's area, it has become common to give or treat someone with flowers whenever someone visits others' homes or during special occasions, so they often give flowers.

The original sentence is confusing with incorrect pronouns and phrases. Correcting pronouns, verb forms, and sentence structure improves clarity.

× I think is so very thoughtful way of four.

✓ I think it is a very thoughtful way of showing care.

The phrase 'way of four' is incorrect. Likely intended is 'way of showing care' or similar. Adding 'it' and correcting the phrase improves grammar.