Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to make your sentences complete and logical. Use simple and correct sentences to express your feelings about flowers, and explain why you like a particular flower with clear reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they make me feel happy and calm. There are many kinds of flowers, but my favorite is the rose because of its beautiful red color and sweet smell.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to form full sentences and explain clearly who loves flowers and what they do with them. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. Whenever I bring flowers home, she decorates the kitchen with them, which makes the room look beautiful and fresh.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Try to answer directly and provide specific details about the flowers near your home. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I don't think there are many flowers where I live. However, near my house, there is a small garden that has some beautiful flowers, so I can see them sometimes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, explain why you post photos on social media.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I love them. Whenever I see beautiful flowers, I take pictures and post them on my social media to share with my friends.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full answer explaining when and why people send flowers in your country. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. People in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions, such as birthdays, weddings, and festivals, to show their love and respect.

× flowers give me on good of hives, an inner city

✓ flowers give me a good feeling, an inner joy

The phrase 'give me on good of hives' is incorrect due to wrong preposition and word choice. The correct phrase should be 'give me a good feeling' to express the positive effect of flowers. Also, 'an inner city' is incorrect in this context; 'an inner joy' or 'inner happiness' fits better.

× there is some any kind of flowers

✓ there are many kinds of flowers

The phrase 'some any kind of flowers' is incorrect because 'some' and 'any' should not be used together. Also, 'flowers' is plural, so 'are' should be used instead of 'is'. 'Many kinds of flowers' is a correct quantifier expression.

× One of the most flower I like is rich arose

✓ One of the flowers I like the most is a rich rose

The phrase 'most flower' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers' plural. Also, 'rich arose' seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'rich rose'. The correct sentence uses plural 'flowers' and singular 'rose'.

× because reader. Color is. Meaning of.

✓ because its color is rich and meaningful

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Reader' is incorrect; it should be 'rich'. The phrase 'Color is. Meaning of.' is incomplete. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning with proper adjective use.

× Yes, I know an sees my mom

✓ Yes, I know my mom

The phrase 'an sees my mom' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mispronunciation or error. The correct sentence is simply 'Yes, I know my mom'.

× My mom's really like all flowers

✓ My mom really likes all flowers

'My mom's really like' is incorrect because 'mom's' is a contraction for 'mom is' or 'mom has', which does not fit here. The correct verb form is 'likes' for third person singular.

× when whenever I. Keep a flowers, my mother. He kept a kitchen. He decorated the kitchen. Enter.

✓ Whenever I keep flowers, my mother decorates the kitchen

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns 'He' for 'my mother'. Also, 'keep a flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'keep flowers'. The corrected sentence is coherent and grammatically correct.

× maybe there is a loss of flower because nearby me there is a one flowers of there's a kind of flower available

✓ Maybe there are lots of flowers nearby because there is a kind of flower available

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'loss of flower' should be 'lots of flowers'; 'there is a one flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural, so 'are' should be used. The corrected sentence uses proper 'there is' and 'there are' constructions.

× I take a photo of flower in my daily life

✓ I take photos of flowers in my daily life

'a photo of flower' is incorrect because 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when talking generally. Also, 'photos' plural fits better for daily life context.

× immediately I poster in my social media

✓ immediately I post on my social media

The verb 'poster' is incorrect; it should be 'post'. Also, the correct preposition with 'post' is 'on' social media, not 'in'.

× People send flowers. The others are especially main office and when.

✓ People send flowers to others, especially in the main office and on special occasions

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'The others are' incorrectly. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper prepositions and structure.