Names— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat repetitive. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating whether your name has a special meaning and then briefly explaining why you like it. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: My name doesn't have a special meaning, but I feel it suits my personality well. I'm proud of it because it truly represents who I am.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly by stating your choices for girl and boy names, explaining their meanings briefly, and avoiding confusing phrases.

Ejemplo: If I have children, I would name my daughter Hay, a Korean name meaning victory. For a son, I would choose Salomon, which has a deep and meaningful significance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'cooling that way.' Try to clearly explain the generational naming and mention the cousins with the same name, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, my name is generational because my paternal grandmother has the same name. Also, some of my cousins share my name, which can be a bit strange, but I think it's fine.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat vague and grammatically incorrect. Try to clearly state the differences, using linking words and specific details to explain how naming has become more global compared to the past.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are differences. Nowadays, Chinese parents often choose global names that are easier to use internationally, whereas in the past, names were more traditional and unique to Chinese culture.

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest but could be improved by avoiding irrelevant details and focusing on the popularity of international names in China, using clear and concise language.

Ejemplo: I'm not very familiar with popular Chinese names, but I believe international names like Jackson are becoming more common among young people in China.

× I consider that my parents really hit the spot with Vanessa 'cause I consider that it suits me really well much with my personality.

✓ I consider that my parents really hit the spot with Vanessa because I think it suits me very well and matches my personality.

The use of ''cause'' is informal and the phrase ''really well much with my personality'' is awkward and incorrect. Replacing '''cause'' with ''because'' and rephrasing to ''suits me very well and matches my personality'' improves clarity and correctness.

× And that's something that I really feel proud of because it's like it truly represents me and I'm on the same page with them and the people who think the same than me.

✓ And that's something that I really feel proud of because it truly represents me and I'm on the same page with them and the people who think the same as me.

The phrase ''think the same than me'' is incorrect; the correct expression is ''think the same as me.'' Also, ''it's like it truly represents me'' is redundant; removing ''it's like'' improves clarity.

× Honestly I have the name of my future kiss Desi decided from my girl I want her to be called Hay, which is a Korean name that represents victory and for my boy if I have the opportunity to have one it will be Salomon which is has a very deeply meaning.

✓ Honestly, I have decided on the name for my future kids. For my girl, I want her to be called Hay, which is a Korean name that represents victory, and for my boy, if I have the opportunity to have one, it will be Salomon, which has a very deep meaning.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper punctuation and structure. Breaking it into clearer sentences and correcting ''which is has a very deeply meaning'' to ''which has a very deep meaning'' improves readability and grammar.

× Yes, my name is actually generational because my grandma for my father's side is cooling that way.

✓ Yes, my name is actually generational because my grandma on my father's side is called that way.

The phrase ''for my father's side'' should be ''on my father's side'' to correctly indicate family lineage. Also, ''cooling'' is likely a typo for ''called.''

× Although I have cousins that have the same name as me so it can be weird but also I think it's OK.

✓ Although I have cousins who have the same name as me, so it can be weird, but I also think it's OK.

''That'' should be replaced with ''who'' when referring to people. Adding commas improves sentence flow.

× I definitely consider that a difference between how Chinese name their children in the past and how they are naming their kids in the present 'cause now it can be more global that suits kids in other parts of the world, and in the past they were a very unusual.

✓ I definitely consider that there is a difference between how Chinese named their children in the past and how they are naming their kids in the present because now names can be more global and suit kids in other parts of the world, whereas in the past they were very unusual.

''Name'' should be ''named'' for past tense. '''Cause'' is informal; replaced with ''because.'' ''It can be more global that suits kids'' is awkward; rephrased for clarity. ''They were a very unusual'' is incomplete; corrected to ''they were very unusual.''

× I need to be honest with this and I'm not that familiar with popular or traditional names in China.

✓ I need to be honest about this, and I'm not very familiar with popular or traditional names in China.

''With this'' is better expressed as ''about this.'' ''Not that familiar'' is informal; ''not very familiar'' is more appropriate.

× However, I met this guy from China whose name is Jackson and he's in her studies.

✓ However, I met this guy from China whose name is Jackson, and he's in his studies.

''Her'' is incorrect when referring to a male; it should be ''his.''