Hometown— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e beshi uh, and repetition use korchen, jar fole answer ta natural lage na. Apnar answer ke aro shundor korte, sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korun ebong linking words use korun. Apni chesta korun 5 sentence er moddhe shothik vabe topic clear korte.

Ejemplo: My hometown is Shredpur, a small village located on the outskirts of the town. It is well-known for its lush greenery and vast paddy fields. Every year, the scenery becomes even more beautiful during the harvest season. The peaceful environment makes it a lovely place to live. Overall, I feel proud of my hometown's natural beauty.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e repetition ache ebong sentence gulo clear na. Apni chesta korun prothome main point bolte, tarpor supporting details dite linking words use kore. Specific details add korle answer aro bhalo hobe.

Ejemplo: I like my hometown because it is situated on a bend of the Porta River, which is very famous in our region. This river is the largest nearby, providing beautiful views and fresh air. Moreover, the river supports local agriculture and fishing, which are important for the community. Therefore, the river adds both beauty and value to my hometown.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e grammar mistakes ache ebong sentence gulo incomplete mone hoy. Apni chesta korun prothome direct uttor din, tarpor supporting details clear vabe bolun. Linking words use korben jate answer logical hoy.

Ejemplo: I lived in my hometown until I was eight years old. After that, I moved to Dhaka to pursue better education and opportunities. Since my village is small and lacks good schools, moving was necessary for my studies. I still remember my childhood there fondly. Overall, I spent my early years in the village before relocating.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e onek uh, repetition ache, jar fole answer ta natural lage na. Apni chesta korun prothome main idea bolun, tarpor supporting details clear vabe linking words diye bolun. Specific examples dile answer aro bhalo hobe.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, my hometown is a good place for childhood because of its peaceful environment. However, it is not suitable for young people seeking higher education or better jobs. This is because there are limited opportunities for quality education and employment. Therefore, many young people move to cities for their future. Overall, the village is ideal for children but not for young adults.

× I small, uh, village, outskirts of town.

✓ I live in a small village on the outskirts of town.

The original sentence lacks a verb and article before 'small village'. 'I small village' is incorrect; it should be 'I live in a small village'. Also, 'outskirts of town' needs the preposition 'on' to be correct.

× And uh, uh, it's very popular for its greenery and uh, Paddy fields and everywhere every year, uh, it's seems very beautiful.

✓ And it is very popular for its greenery and paddy fields, and every year, it seems very beautiful.

The phrase 'it's seems' is incorrect; 'it seems' is correct. Also, 'Paddy' should not be capitalized unless it's a proper noun. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary fillers and correcting verb usage.

× Well, I like about hometown since it's in it's it's situated in a bend of a river known as Porta, and it's a very prominent and famous river.

✓ Well, I like my hometown because it is situated on a bend of a river known as Porta, which is a very prominent and famous river.

The phrase 'like about hometown' is incorrect; it should be 'like my hometown'. Also, 'situated in a bend' should be 'situated on a bend' because we use 'on' with bends of rivers. The sentence also had redundant words 'it's it's it's' which are corrected.

× And it's this river is the largest.

✓ And this river is the largest.

The phrase 'it's this river' is incorrect; 'it's' (it is) is unnecessary here. The correct sentence is 'And this river is the largest.'

× Well, I have spent my childhood there when I was 8 years old.

✓ Well, I spent my childhood there until I was 8 years old.

The present perfect 'have spent' is not appropriate with the specific past time 'when I was 8 years old'. The simple past 'spent' fits better. Also, 'when I was 8 years old' suggests the end of the period, so 'until I was 8 years old' is clearer.

× That time I moved to Dhaka because of better opportunities and studies.

✓ At that time, I moved to Dhaka because of better opportunities and studies.

The phrase 'That time' should be 'At that time' to correctly indicate a point in the past.

× Since the village is very small and there is no opportunities to study better so I spend.

✓ Since the village is very small and there are no opportunities to study better, I left.

'No opportunities' requires plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'so I spend' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I left' or 'I moved'. The sentence needs a comma before 'so' or better to use 'since' and restructure the sentence.

× I think in my point of view, uh, it's a good place for, uh, childhood, uh, but uh, it's not a prominent place, uh, and suitable place for young people since there is no opportunities to get a better education and qualification and, uh, better, uh, job.

✓ I think from my point of view, it is a good place for childhood, but it is not a prominent or suitable place for young people since there are no opportunities to get better education, qualifications, and better jobs.

The phrase 'in my point of view' should be 'from my point of view'. 'No opportunities' requires plural verb 'are'. 'Qualification' should be plural 'qualifications' to match 'education' and 'jobs'. Also, 'better job' should be plural 'better jobs' to be consistent.