Hometown— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you could say: "My hometown is Baton Tani, which is located not far from Bangkok. This proximity makes it convenient for me to visit the capital, usually every two weeks by bus."

Ejemplo: My hometown is Baton Tani, located close to Bangkok. This makes it easy for me to travel to the capital, which I usually do every two weeks by bus.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and finish your sentences properly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details. For example, you could say: "I like the many parks in my hometown because they help me relax. For instance, I usually take a walk in the park every morning, which makes me feel peaceful and refreshed."

Ejemplo: I enjoy the numerous parks near my home because they help me relax. For example, I take a walk every morning in the park, which makes me feel peaceful and refreshed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically. For example, you could say: "I have lived here for 10 years since I bought a single-story house that provides a peaceful life. Additionally, I often visit the nearby market and park, which makes my life comfortable and enjoyable."

Ejemplo: I have lived here for 10 years since I bought a single-story house that offers a peaceful life. Moreover, I often visit the nearby market and park, which makes my life comfortable and enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid grammatical errors and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to organise your ideas and provide specific examples. For instance, you could say: "Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it offers peaceful areas and modern amenities that help maintain a balanced life. For example, young people often visit temples for relaxation and also enjoy modern recreational facilities."

Ejemplo: Yes, my hometown is good for young people because it has peaceful places and modern amenities that help maintain a balanced life. For example, young people often visit temples to relax and also enjoy modern recreational facilities.

× Well, my hometown is Baton Tani is located not far away from the Bangkok which made me comfortable when I go to capital.

✓ Well, my hometown, Baton Tani, is located not far from Bangkok, which makes me comfortable when I go to the capital.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error due to the repetition of 'is' and incorrect article usage with 'the Bangkok'. The sentence should be restructured to avoid redundancy and use correct articles. 'Baton Tani' is the name of the hometown, so it should be set off by commas. 'Bangkok' does not need 'the' before it, but 'the capital' requires the definite article. Also, 'made' should be 'makes' to agree with the present tense context.

× Well, my hometown is Baton Tani is located not far away from the Bangkok which made me comfortable when I go to capital.

✓ Well, my hometown, Baton Tani, is located not far from Bangkok, which makes me comfortable when I go to the capital.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'Bangkok', which is a proper noun and does not require an article. However, 'the capital' correctly uses the definite article because it refers to a specific place.

× which made me comfortable when I go to capital.

✓ which makes me comfortable when I go to the capital.

The verb 'made' is in the past tense, but the sentence context is present tense, so it should be 'makes'. Also, 'go to capital' is missing the article 'the' before 'capital'.

× For example, I usually go to Bangkok around 2 weeks.

✓ For example, I usually go to Bangkok every two weeks.

The phrase 'around 2 weeks' is incorrect for expressing frequency. The correct expression is 'every two weeks' to indicate a regular interval.

× A town by taking bus make me easier.

✓ Taking the bus to the town makes it easier for me.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It lacks a proper subject and verb agreement. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects subject-verb agreement.

× Well, I like many parks in my hometown because there are many parks around my house which make me feel relaxed and released.

✓ Well, I like the many parks in my hometown because there are many parks around my house which make me feel relaxed and relieved.

The phrase 'like many parks' is vague; 'like the many parks' specifies the parks being referred to. Also, 'released' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'relieved' to express a feeling of relaxation.

× which make me feel relaxed and released.

✓ which make me feel relaxed and relieved.

The word 'released' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'relieved' to describe a feeling of comfort or ease.

× For example, I usually go to park every morning for walking and taking a walk, which helps me feel peaceful and.

✓ For example, I usually go to the park every morning for walking, which helps me feel peaceful.

The phrase 'go to park' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'walking and taking a walk' is redundant; 'walking' alone suffices. The sentence ends abruptly with 'peaceful and.' which is incomplete, so it is corrected to end properly.

× I have lived here for 10 years because I bought a single story house that gives me my life peaceful.

✓ I have lived here for 10 years because I bought a single-story house that gives me a peaceful life.

The phrase 'my life peaceful' is incorrect; it should be 'a peaceful life'. Also, 'single story' should be hyphenated as 'single-story' when used as a compound adjective.

× Peaceful. I think my life peaceful.

✓ Peaceful. I think my life is peaceful.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective. 'My life peaceful' is incomplete without the verb.

× For example, I usually visit the nearby market and park, which makes me make my life comfortable and enjoyable.

✓ For example, I usually visit the nearby market and park, which makes my life comfortable and enjoyable.

The phrase 'makes me make my life' is redundant and incorrect. The correct structure is 'makes my life'.

× Well, of course my hometown is It's good for young people because there are a lot of peaceful places and modern amenity which make life balance.

✓ Well, of course, my hometown is good for young people because there are a lot of peaceful places and modern amenities which make life balanced.

The phrase 'my hometown is It's good' is redundant; 'is' and 'It's' both serve as the verb. 'Amenity' should be plural 'amenities' to match 'a lot of'. 'Make life balance' is incorrect; it should be 'make life balanced' or 'help balance life'.

× there are a lot of peaceful places and modern amenity which make life balance.

✓ there are a lot of peaceful places and modern amenities which make life balanced.

The noun 'amenity' should be plural 'amenities' to agree with 'a lot of'. Also, 'make life balance' is incorrect; 'make life balanced' is correct.

× For example, young people sometimes visit to temple and another time go to the.

✓ For example, young people sometimes visit the temple and other times go elsewhere.

The phrase 'visit to temple' is incorrect; 'visit' does not require 'to'. 'Another time go to the.' is incomplete and unclear; it should be rephrased to 'other times go elsewhere' or similar to complete the thought.