Hometown— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing words like 'inner autistic'. Try to use clear and correct place names and structure your sentence properly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: My hometown is Biratnagar, which is located in the southern part of Nepal. However, I am currently living in Kathmandu, the capital city.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give specific details about what you like, use linking words, and avoid fragmented sentences. Speak clearly about features like infrastructure, markets, or community.

Ejemplo: I like the development in my hometown, especially the well-maintained roadways and the availability of supermarkets, which make shopping convenient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'at another farm'. Try to give a clear time frame and reason for moving, using correct grammar.

Ejemplo: I lived in my hometown for about 15 to 20 years before moving to Kathmandu to complete my education.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally relevant but has some hesitation and incomplete sentences. Try to speak confidently, use linking words, and give specific examples of facilities for young people.

Ejemplo: Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it offers many facilities such as schools, parks, and sports centers that support their daily needs.

× My hometown is inner autistic which is located in the southern part of ****** but currently. I'm living in the capital city of Nepal, which is also called Kathmandu.

✓ My hometown is Inner Autistic, which is located in the southern part of ******, but currently, I'm living in the capital city of Nepal, which is also called Kathmandu.

The sentence has punctuation and capitalization issues, and the phrase 'inner autistic' seems to be a mishearing or typo; assuming it is a proper noun, it should be capitalized. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses properly. The preposition use is correct here, but the sentence structure needs improvement for clarity.

× There are numerous things that I like from my hometown, such as. Influencers or development? Development, our roadways. The Super markers and. State. There now as customer Billings.

✓ There are numerous things that I like about my hometown, such as infrastructure development, our roadways, supermarkets, and state services. There are also customer billings now.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'like about' is the correct phrase to express liking aspects of a place. The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I lived there for at another farm. Almost a 15 to 20 years and then I moved to Kathmandu or to complete my education.

✓ I lived there for almost 15 to 20 years, and then I moved to Kathmandu to complete my education.

The phrase 'for at another farm' is incorrect and unclear; it seems to be a mishearing or error. The correct phrase is 'for almost 15 to 20 years.' Also, 'or to complete' should be 'to complete.' The past tense 'lived' and 'moved' are correctly used here.

× I Yes, it is a good place to live there because it provides numerous facilities. Uh. Which people needed in their basic lives or daily lives?

✓ Yes, it is a good place to live because it provides numerous facilities that people need in their basic or daily lives.

The pronoun 'I' at the beginning is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to match the present tense context. The sentence fragments need to be combined for clarity and grammatical correctness.