Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 答えが混乱しており時制や語順の誤りが多いです。まず短く明確なトピック文を述べ、次に職歴の変化を時系列で簡潔に説明してください。文法（現在形・過去形）を正しく使い、不要な語を省き、1～3文で収めましょう。たとえば「I work for ...」「Previously I worked as ...」のように分けると自然です。

Ejemplo: I currently work as a designer at a company. Previously, I worked at the US Diner, but two years ago I changed roles because I found designing more interesting.

Sugerencia: 内容は伝わるが発音やつなぎの言葉（'so oh','hopefully'の誤用）、語順の乱れがあり冗長です。まず場所を明確に述べ、理由や通勤の利点を連結語（for example, so, because）でつなぎ、文を短く保ってください。具体的な情報（駅名や徒歩時間）を一つ加えると良いです。

Ejemplo: I work for an internet company located in central Tokyo. Because I live nearby, I can walk to the office in about 15 minutes, so my commute is very relaxing.

Sugerencia: 支援の内容が混乱しており地名や文の構造が間違っています。まず肯定の立場を示し、その後で理由を明確に列挙してください。支店の場所は正しく発音・表記し、'flexible'の使い方を具体的に説明しましょう（例：flexible hours, flexible working locations）。文は2〜3文にまとめてください。

Ejemplo: Yes, it is. The company has branches in Tokyo, Nagoya and Osaka, and now I work in Kobe, so I can sometimes choose which office to use. This flexibility makes it a comfortable place to work.

Sugerencia: とても良い回答です。明確なトピック文と具体的な理由（東京タワーの眺め）があり、自然です。改善点は時制の一貫性と語彙の幅を少し増やすことです。例えば'I've worked'や現在の感情を補う語（enjoy, appreciate）を入れるとより洗練されます。

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like my office. I worked at the Tokyo office for three years, which was right in front of Tokyo Tower, so I really enjoyed the beautiful view from the window, especially at night.

Sugerencia: 意図は伝わるが文法と語順が不自然で不完全な文があります。まず明確な目標を述べ、その後理由を具体的に述べてください。'I would like to' は文末で完結させ、企業名を例示する際は'for example'や'such as'を正しく使いましょう。また、具体的なスキルや役割を一つ挙げると説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to work for a global company such as Google or Apple. Working in an international environment would help me improve my technical skills and communication to meet global standards.

× I work for the US Diner but before I work as an This year designing is more interesting for me so I changed my roles 2 years ago.

✓ I work for the US Diner, but before I worked as a designer. Designing became more interesting to me, so I changed my role 2 years ago.

The sentence mixes present and past improperly. Use past tense 'worked' for the previous job (action completed in the past). 'Work as an This year designing is more interesting for me' is ungrammatical — replace with 'worked as a designer.' Use 'became' or 'became more interesting to me' to show change, and 'changed my role' (singular) fits better. Also add punctuation for clarity.

× I work in an Internet company which is located in the center of Tokyo. So oh when I go to the office the train is cool every day but hopefully I work. I can walk from home so I feel very relaxed.

✓ I work at an internet company located in the center of Tokyo. When I go to the office, the train is crowded every day, but luckily I can walk from home, so I feel very relaxed.

Use 'work at' or 'work for' for companies; 'at an internet company' is natural. 'which is located' can be shortened to 'located.' 'the train is cool' is likely wrong—use 'crowded' or 'busy.' 'hopefully I work' is incorrect; use 'luckily I can walk from home.' Maintain present tense for regular actions.

× I think so because there are three branches and Japan, Tokyo, Nagoya, Osuka and now I moved to Kobe so I can go to Ossic office E3 and it's very flexible to work.

✓ I think so because the company has three branches in Japan: Tokyo, Nagoya, and Osaka. Now I moved to Kobe, so I can go to the Osaka office when needed, and it's very flexible to work.

Incorrect preposition and listing: say 'branches in Japan' and list cities separated by commas. 'Osuka' should be 'Osaka.' 'I can go to Ossic office E3' is unclear—assume 'Osaka office.' Use 'when needed' or 'occasionally' to clarify. Use commas and colons for clarity.

× Yes, I like the office. I worked in Tokyo office for three years and the Tokyo office is in front of Tokyo Tower, so the scenery from the office is really beautiful, especially at night.

✓ Yes, I like the office. I worked in the Tokyo office for three years, and the Tokyo office is in front of Tokyo Tower, so the view from the office is really beautiful, especially at night.

Use the article 'the Tokyo office.' 'Scenery' is grammatical but 'view' is more natural in this context. Maintain past tense 'worked' for the period you were in Tokyo.

× Old country work in Japan's company, so I like to work in international environment in the future, such as Google or Apple. It allows me to improve my skills and communication in global standards and I would like to.

✓ I want to work in an international environment in the future, such as at Google or Apple, because it will allow me to improve my skills and communication to meet global standards.

The original sentence has unclear structure and fragments. 'Old country work in Japan's company' is ungrammatical; replace with a clear statement of intent. Use 'want to work' for future desire and 'will allow me' for expected benefit. Use 'at Google or Apple' for companies and 'meet global standards' for clarity.