Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, instead of saying "I love like my role because it it allows me", say "I love my role because it allows me". Also, keep your answer concise and natural by avoiding filler words and repetitions.

Ejemplo: I currently work at Amazon and have been there for five years. My responsibilities include picking, packing, and assisting customers. I enjoy my role because it allows me to meet new people and help them.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating phrases like "which is which is" and ensure correct place names. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as "and" or "which". Try to be more specific about the location and the opportunities you mentioned.

Ejemplo: I work at Amazon, a multinational corporation based in Brampton, Ontario. I enjoy my job because it offers a dynamic environment and many opportunities to learn new skills.

Sugerencia: Focus on eliminating filler words like "uh" and avoid repeating words such as "skill skills". Use linking words properly to make your answer coherent, for example, "which makes the job very enjoyable."

Ejemplo: Definitely, it is an excellent place to work because it allows me to develop my skills and gain valuable experience. The environment is very supportive, and my colleagues are friendly, which makes the job very enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating words and filler sounds like "uh". Also, use articles correctly, for example, "a well-equipped workspace". Try to link your ideas smoothly and be specific about how the environment helps you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely like the place where I work. It is a very comfortable and well-equipped workspace, which significantly boosts my productivity and motivation. For example, natural light and a quiet environment help me focus better on my tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you could add linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, such as "therefore" or "so". Also, specify the type of internship or courses to make your answer more detailed.

Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to pursue a career in digital marketing because I am passionate about creativity and technology. Therefore, I aim to gain more experience through internships in marketing firms and online courses to enhance my skills.

× Currently I am working in Amazon company.

✓ Currently I am working at Amazon company.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'Amazon company'. The correct preposition to indicate working for a company is 'at'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× I have been working there from past five years.

✓ I have been working there for the past five years.

The phrase 'from past five years' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'for the past five years' to indicate duration of time up to now.

× My job responsibilities are picking, packing and assisting customers.

✓ My job responsibilities are picking, packing, and assisting customers.

A comma is needed before 'and' in a list of three or more items (Oxford comma) for clarity. Although not a grammar error per se, adding the comma improves readability.

× And I love like my role because it it allows me to meet new customers and helping them.

✓ And I like my role because it allows me to meet new customers and help them.

The phrase 'love like' is redundant; choose either 'love' or 'like'. Also, 'helping' should be in base form 'help' after 'and' to parallel 'meet'. The repeated 'it' is a typo and should be corrected.

× I work at Amazon which is which is multinational corporation based in Brahman, Ontario and I enjoy my work because it offers a dynamic environment and opportunities to learn new skills.

✓ I work at Amazon, which is a multinational corporation based in Brahman, Ontario, and I enjoy my work because it offers a dynamic environment and opportunities to learn new skills.

The phrase 'which is which is' is a repetition error. Also, 'multinational corporation' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× Definitely, this is excellent place to work with because it allows me to develop my skill skills and gain valuable experience.

✓ Definitely, this is an excellent place to work because it allows me to develop my skills and gain valuable experience.

The noun 'place' requires the indefinite article 'an' before a vowel sound. The phrase 'work with' is incorrect here; 'work' alone suffices. 'Skill skills' is a repetition error; it should be 'skills'.

× The environment is very supportive and my colleagues are very friendly, thus uh, which makes a job very enjoyable.

✓ The environment is very supportive and my colleagues are very friendly, which makes the job very enjoyable.

The conjunction 'thus uh' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow. 'A job' should be 'the job' to refer to the specific job mentioned.

× Yes, I would definitely like the place where I work, uh, work.

✓ Yes, I definitely like the place where I work.

The phrase 'would definitely like the place where I work' is awkward; 'like' is better here. The repeated 'work' and filler 'uh' should be removed for clarity.

× This is very comfortable, well equipped, uh, workspace can significantly boost my productivity and motivation.

✓ This very comfortable, well-equipped workspace can significantly boost my productivity and motivation.

The sentence lacks a verb; adding 'can' after 'workspace' fixes this. Also, 'well equipped' should be hyphenated as 'well-equipped' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× For example, natural lights and quiet environment helps me focus better on my tasks.

✓ For example, natural light and a quiet environment help me focus better on my tasks.

'Lights' should be singular 'light' as a general concept. 'Environment' needs the article 'a'. The verb 'helps' should be plural 'help' to agree with the compound subject.