Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น โดยตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและคำที่ไม่สมบูรณ์ เช่น ควรบอกตำแหน่งงานและบริษัทอย่างชัดเจน พร้อมอธิบายสั้นๆ เกี่ยวกับงานของคุณ

Ejemplo: I work as an AQS engineer at Company Limited. I have been working there for two years, and I find my job very interesting because it involves quality control and project management.

Sugerencia: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล และให้ข้อมูลที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับสถานที่ทำงานและเวลาทำงาน

Ejemplo: I work in Phuket city, Thailand. The company is located in a sub-district there. Our working days are from Saturday to Monday each week.

Sugerencia: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน เช่น การบอกระยะทางหรือเวลาที่ใช้เดินทาง และความสะดวกสบายของสถานที่ทำงาน

Ejemplo: In my opinion, it is a good place to work because it is close to my accommodation. I only spend about 15 minutes commuting to the office, which is very convenient.

Sugerencia: ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้อง พร้อมอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างละเอียดและใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น การบอกถึงความสะดวกสบายของสถานที่ทำงานและสิ่งอำนวยความสะดวกใกล้เคียง

Ejemplo: Yes, I like the place where I work because the company is very close to my home. It is also near a shopping mall and a bus station, which makes it very convenient for me.

Sugerencia: ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมอธิบายแผนงานในอนาคตอย่างละเอียดและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ

Ejemplo: My future work plan is to become a senior QS engineer in a public company. I hope to continue working in Phuket city, just like my current job.

× I working for.

✓ I am working for.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'working'. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' plus the '-ing' form of the verb. The correct form is 'I am working'.

× It just my working experience and.

✓ It is just my working experience.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding the verb 'is' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× My interesting to to to be.

✓ I am interested in it.

'Interesting' is an adjective describing something that causes interest, but here the speaker wants to express their own interest, so 'interested' (past participle adjective) is appropriate. Also, the phrase is incomplete and repetitive; 'I am interested in it' is a correct expression.

× I working in Phuket city in Thailand, the located of company sub district.

✓ I am working in Phuket city in Thailand, in the company's sub-district location.

Again, the present continuous tense requires 'am' before 'working'. Also, 'the located of company sub district' is incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'in the company's sub-district location' for clarity and correctness.

× We we work Saturday to Monday Alaya.

✓ We work from Saturday to Monday at Alaya.

The repetition 'We we' is an error. Also, prepositions are missing; 'from' indicates the time range, and 'at' indicates the place. 'Alaya' is assumed to be a place name.

× I think there is good place to work because uh, close to my accommodation I spend around 15 minutes for UMM.

✓ I think there is a good place to work because it is close to my accommodation. I spend around 15 minutes commuting to the office.

The phrase 'there is good place' lacks the article 'a'. Also, the sentence is run-on and unclear. Adding 'it is' clarifies the sentence. 'For UMM' is unclear; assuming it means commuting to the office, it is rephrased accordingly.

× Yes, I like my players that I work the company located very close from my accommodation and were very close to shopping mall and bus station.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work. The company is located very close to my accommodation and is also very close to the shopping mall and bus station.

'Players' is incorrect; likely meant 'place'. 'That I work the company' is ungrammatical; 'where I work' is correct. 'Located very close from' should be 'located very close to'. Also, 'were' should be 'is' to agree with singular subject 'company'.

× My future work plan is to be a senior QS engineer in public company uh, but the the company is supposed to locate it in uh Phuket city the same as current.

✓ My future work plan is to be a senior QS engineer in a public company, but the company is supposed to be located in Phuket city, the same as currently.

'Locate it' is incorrect; the passive form 'be located' is needed. Also, 'the same as current' should be 'the same as currently' or 'the same as at present'. Adding the article 'a' before 'public company' is necessary.