Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to give a direct answer first, then add clear supporting details. Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, say "I am currently working at Bliss, a software company, which is a 30-minute commute from my home. I used to be a student two years ago, but now I work full-time."

Ejemplo: I am currently working at Bliss, a software company, which is a 30-minute commute from my home. I used to be a student two years ago, but now I work full-time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Try to be specific and clear about your workplace location and environment. Also, avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. For example, say "I work at a company located in the city center. It takes me about 30 minutes by bus to get there. The workplace is enjoyable, and my boss and colleagues are very friendly."

Ejemplo: I work at a company located in the city center. It takes me about 30 minutes by bus to get there. The workplace is enjoyable, and my boss and colleagues are very friendly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same words. For example, say "Yes, absolutely. The workplace is very supportive and calm, which helps me stay energetic and productive. Moreover, I have a good relationship with my approachable friends and colleagues."

Ejemplo: Yes, absolutely. The workplace is very supportive and calm, which helps me stay energetic and productive. Moreover, I have a good relationship with my approachable friends and colleagues.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words. For example, say "Yes, I like my workplace because it is quiet and peaceful, which helps me concentrate during meetings. Also, my boss and colleagues are down to earth and very supportive."

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because it is quiet and peaceful, which helps me concentrate during meetings. Also, my boss and colleagues are down to earth and very supportive.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good ideas but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your plans clearly and use linking words. For example, say "Although I don't plan to change my job soon, in the future I would like to work in governmental agencies. I hope to develop software products that benefit people, such as digitalizing licensing and tax processes."

Ejemplo: Although I don't plan to change my job soon, in the future I would like to work in governmental agencies. I hope to develop software products that benefit people, such as digitalizing licensing and tax processes.

× I used to be student about two years ago but currently I am full time.

✓ I used to be a student about two years ago but currently I am full time.

The sentence is in past tense correctly but missing the article 'a' before 'student'. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I work at a company college place which is situated at the center of a coupon.

✓ I work at a company called College Place which is situated at the center of a coupon.

The phrase 'company college place' is unclear and likely a misused preposition or missing word. Correcting to 'a company called College Place' clarifies the meaning.

× It is about 30 minutes by commute by bus to commute to the work.

✓ It is about 30 minutes by bus to commute to work.

The phrase 'by commute by bus to commute to the work' is redundant and incorrect. 'By bus' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate mode of transport, and 'to work' is the correct phrase without 'the'.

× It is very enjoyable place.

✓ It is a very enjoyable place.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very enjoyable place'. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.

× My boss and colleagues are very friendly and we typically do a lot of things from.

✓ My boss and colleagues are very friendly and we typically do a lot of things together.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'from' which is incorrect. Replacing 'from' with 'together' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Similarly, my friends and colleagues are very much approachable too.

✓ Similarly, my friends and colleagues are very approachable too.

The phrase 'very much approachable' is incorrect. 'Very approachable' is the correct adjective phrase.

× I have very good relationship with them.

✓ I have a very good relationship with them.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very good relationship'. Also, 'relationship' is singular countable noun requiring an article.

× Furthermore, the workplace is very calm and supportive, which makes me very energetic as well as very productive throughout.

✓ Furthermore, the workplace is very calm and supportive, which makes me very energetic as well as very productive throughout the day.

The sentence is missing a time reference after 'throughout'. Adding 'the day' clarifies the meaning.

× As the workplace is very quiet and peaceful, I can become too much concentrated during my work.

✓ As the workplace is very quiet and peaceful, I can become very concentrated during my work.

The phrase 'too much concentrated' is incorrect. 'Very concentrated' is the correct adverb-adjective combination.

× Similarly, my boss and the friends and colleagues are very down to earth and very approachable.

✓ Similarly, my boss and my friends and colleagues are very down to earth and very approachable.

The sentence is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' before 'friends and colleagues' for clarity.

× Although I don't have any immediate plans to change the job, but in the future I would be particularly engaging in governmental agencies where I would love to create software companies and products for the people benefit.

✓ Although I don't have any immediate plans to change the job, in the future I would like to be particularly engaged in governmental agencies where I would love to create software companies and products for the people's benefit.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'would be particularly engaging' instead of 'would like to be particularly engaged'. Also, 'for the people benefit' should be 'for the people's benefit' to show possession.

× Maybe digitalize all the things like licensing and tax completion.

✓ Maybe digitalize all things like licensing and tax completion.

The phrase 'all the things' is informal and unnecessary. 'All things' is more appropriate here.