Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'makes my workplace a lot but entertaining as well as very much interesting,' you can say 'makes my workplace both enjoyable and interesting.'

Ejemplo: I work at a company called Izblis located in the center of Kunderl. I enjoy working there because my boss and colleagues are very friendly. My boss creates a positive and interesting work environment, which makes my job enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer has several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and be more specific. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I work as a software engineer at a company called Izblis. I develop software and contribute to the products we are building. This experience helps me learn a lot about the software industry and its positive impact on society.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work. Our office is next to a beautiful garden that smells fresh. During breaks, I enjoy listening to the birds chirping and relaxing in the peaceful environment. The nearby infrastructure is also very convenient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'umm'.

Ejemplo: Absolutely, I like the place where I work because of my supportive boss and friendly colleagues. My boss encourages us to share and implement our ideas, making the workplace very approachable and kind. I enjoy working with my team.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your future plans clearly and use specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to continue working as a software engineer. I want to develop software that positively impacts my country. For example, I aim to create applications that help citizens access government services easily and efficiently through their mobile devices.

× My boss is very friendly and makes my workplace a lot but entertaining as well as very much interesting.

✓ My boss is very friendly and makes my workplace not only fun but also very interesting.

The phrase 'makes my workplace a lot but entertaining as well as very much interesting' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'not only fun but also very interesting' to properly connect the adjectives and convey the intended meaning.

× I work there is a software engineer.

✓ I work there as a software engineer.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is' instead of 'as' to indicate the role. The correct preposition to describe one's position is 'as'.

× I tend to build software in my workplace as well as help contributing toward the development of the product that we are currently building.

✓ I tend to build software in my workplace as well as help contribute toward the development of the product that we are currently building.

The phrase 'help contributing' is incorrect; after 'help' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'help contribute' is correct.

× I tend to like get a lot of idea regarding the software environment and software industries as well as hypopositive impact on today.

✓ I tend to get a lot of ideas regarding the software environment and software industries as well as have a positive impact today.

The phrase 'like get a lot of idea' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary and 'idea' should be plural 'ideas'. Also, 'hypopositive impact on today' is unclear and corrected to 'have a positive impact today'.

× Our office is right next to the garden which smells very nice.

✓ Our office is right next to a garden which smells very nice.

Using 'the garden' implies a specific garden known to both speaker and listener; if not specific, 'a garden' is more appropriate.

× I tend to enjoy the beauty as well as the charming space that is right to next to our office as well as during the during the break time I enjoy mostly the chopping of chirping of the bird as well as the scene and similarly the infrastructure near our office is very.

✓ I tend to enjoy the beauty as well as the charming space that is right next to our office. During break time, I mostly enjoy the chirping of the birds and the scenery. Similarly, the infrastructure near our office is very good.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'right to next to' should be 'right next to'; 'chopping of chirping' is incorrect, should be 'chirping of the birds'; 'the scene' is vague, better as 'the scenery'; sentence is incomplete and needs proper punctuation and completion.

× That's absolutely.

✓ Absolutely.

'That's absolutely' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct response is simply 'Absolutely' to affirm the statement.

× He give us the space for us to have our own ideas and being implemented.

✓ He gives us the space to have our own ideas implemented.

'He give' should be 'He gives' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'being implemented' is incorrect here; 'to have our own ideas implemented' is correct.

× So he's very approachable and kind. As well as my colleagues are also very friendly.

✓ He is very approachable and kind, and my colleagues are also very friendly.

Starting a sentence with 'As well as' is incorrect here; it should be connected properly with the previous sentence using 'and'.

× Everything in software engineer.

✓ Everything is related to software engineering.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs a verb and proper noun form to make sense.

× Mostly I'll be contributing to a developing the software which would have the positive impact onto my country.

✓ Mostly, I'll be contributing to developing software which will have a positive impact on my country.

'Contributing to a developing the software' is incorrect; it should be 'contributing to developing software'. Also, 'would have the positive impact onto' should be 'will have a positive impact on'.

× For example, I would be building some software that will help implement government policies as well As for the citizen that they can access and get these government services efficiently and effectively on their own mobile as well as digitally they would be.

✓ For example, I would be building some software that will help implement government policies so that citizens can access and get these government services efficiently and effectively on their own mobile devices digitally.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'as well As for the citizen that they can' incorrectly. It should be connected properly with 'so that citizens can' and 'mobile' should be 'mobile devices' for clarity.