Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: I am currently a student, but I also do part-time jobs occasionally to support myself financially. However, I mainly focus on my studies during most of the time.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear and concise answer with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'like that'.

Ejemplo: I am currently working part-time at my husband's education consultancy office. My tasks include handling applications and attending meetings related to the business.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity by using correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because the company supports its staff and allows them to perform their duties independently without unnecessary pressure. This creates a comfortable working environment.

Sugerencia: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons why you like the place.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is comfortable and relaxed. Since it is my husband's office, I feel free and have no restrictions, which helps me work better.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your plans.

Ejemplo: After graduation, I plan to start my own education consultancy company. This will allow me to work more conveniently and pursue my career goals effectively.

× Currently I am a student but sometimes I do some part time job also that's make me some financial support that's why I do that others.

✓ Currently I am a student but sometimes I do some part-time jobs also; that makes me some financial support, that's why I do that sometimes.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Also, 'part time job' should be plural 'part-time jobs' to indicate multiple instances, and 'others' is unclear and replaced with 'sometimes' for clarity.

× Recently I'm doing my part time job at my husband office.

✓ Recently I'm doing my part-time job at my husband's office.

The preposition 'at' is correct, but 'husband office' needs possessive form 'husband's office' to show ownership.

× They have an education consultancy office. So we have more application work and some meetings also like that.

✓ They have an education consultancy office. So we have more application work and some meetings as well.

The phrase 'like that' is informal and unclear; 'as well' is more appropriate. 'More application work' is acceptable but could be clearer with 'a lot of application work'.

× So I do and take more work on there.

✓ So I do and take more work there.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'work' in this context; 'work there' is correct.

× Yes, it's a good place to work because the companies support the staff and and their duty with their own without any limitation.

✓ Yes, it's a good place to work because the company supports the staff and their duties on their own without any limitation.

'Companies' should be singular 'company' to match the context. 'Their duty' should be plural 'their duties' to agree with 'staff'. 'With their own' is incorrect; 'on their own' is the correct phrase.

× So they do not pull or push the stuff.

✓ So they do not pull or push the staff.

'Stuff' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'staff' referring to employees.

× So uh, they are convenient to working there, so that will make them more.

✓ So, uh, they are comfortable working there, so that makes them more productive.

'Convenient to working' is incorrect; 'comfortable working' is correct. 'Make them more' is incomplete; adding 'productive' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, of course I like the place I'm working now because it's a comfortable zone.

✓ Yes, of course I like the place where I'm working now because it's a comfortable zone.

Adding 'where' clarifies the relative clause referring to the place.

× Moreover, that's my husband's office, so I don't have any restrictions or any uncomfortable there.

✓ Moreover, that's my husband's office, so I don't have any restrictions or feel uncomfortable there.

'Any uncomfortable' is incorrect; 'feel uncomfortable' is the correct expression.

× So, uh, I really do my own, My own what? I'm sorry.

✓ So, uh, I really do my own work. Sorry, I lost my train of thought.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; completing it with 'work' and adding an apology for hesitation improves clarity.

× Of course, I have some future work plans there after my graduation.

✓ Of course, I have some future work plans after my graduation.

The word 'there' is unnecessary and confusing in this context and should be removed.

× I built my own company for my education consultancy, so I will be more convin convenient with that office and I will do my best for my future.

✓ I will build my own company for my education consultancy, so I will be more convenient with that office and I will do my best for my future.

'Built' is past tense but the plan is for the future, so 'will build' is correct. 'Convin convenient' seems to be a typo; 'convenient' is the correct word. The phrase 'more convenient with that office' is awkward but kept for meaning.