Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为完整，但语言表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“in both person and professional”应为“in both personal and professional contexts”。建议加强语法准确性和表达的自然流畅。

Ejemplo: I'm a graduate student majoring in social work. I chose this field because it helps me develop important communication skills, which are useful in both personal and professional life.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“is have”应为“has”，且“chatty”用词不当，表达不自然。建议使用更准确和正式的词汇描述工作环境，如“friendly”或“welcoming”。

Ejemplo: I work at Changchun Shifan University, which is located in Changchun. I like it because the campus has a beautiful atmosphere and the teachers and students are very friendly.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和无意义的词汇，保持句子完整。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it's a great place to work because the atmosphere is pleasant and both teachers and students are friendly.

Sugerencia: 回答含糊且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议明确表达喜欢的原因，使用正确的语法和词汇。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like working here because the teachers are very knowledgeable and supportive, especially in social work.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了未来计划，但语法和句子结构不完整，如“Continually I want be”应为“I want to continue being”，且句子断裂。建议使用完整句子并注意语法。

Ejemplo: I want to continue working as a social worker because I hope to help more people improve their quality of life.

× I choose this major because I believe it helps me develop important skills for communication and I think these skills are very useful in both person and professional.

✓ I chose this major because I believe it helps me develop important skills for communication and I think these skills are very useful in both personal and professional contexts.

句中“choose”应使用过去时“chose”，因为描述的是过去的选择行为；“person”应为形容词“personal”，表示“个人的”；“professional”后应加名词“contexts”以完整表达“职业方面”。

× I started at Changchun Shifan University, which is located in Changchun because I think the university is have a very beautiful atmosphere and the teachers and students are very chatty.

✓ I started at Changchun Shifan University, which is located in Changchun because I think the university has a very beautiful atmosphere and the teachers and students are very chatty.

句中“is have”结构错误，应改为“has”，表示“拥有”；“have”是动词原形，不能与“is”连用。

× I think it a very wonderful place because the school atmosphere is a very nice beautiful quote and teachers and students are very chatty and friendly and the.

✓ I think it is a very wonderful place because the school atmosphere is very nice and beautiful, and the teachers and students are very chatty and friendly.

句中缺少动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整；“nice beautiful quote”表达不清，应去掉“quote”，并用“nice and beautiful”连接形容词；句尾“and the.”不完整，应删除。

× Yes, I would like because this place have a worry. Best teachers about social work?

✓ Yes, I would like it because this place has very good teachers about social work.

句中“have a worry”表达错误，应为“has very good”，表示“有很好的”；“would like”后应加宾语“it”；“Best”应为形容词“very good”或“best”前加冠词。

× Continually I want be a social worker because I want to help more people to improve their. Life quality.

✓ I want to be a social worker because I want to help more people improve their quality of life.

句中“want be”缺少不定式“to”，应为“want to be”；“Continually”用法不当，去掉或改为“I want to”；“Life quality”表达顺序错误，应为“quality of life”；句中句号位置错误，应合并句子。