Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and slightly unclear due to the phrase 'Electro disability'. Try to be more concise and use correct terminology. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'children with special needs' and 'children having disability'.

Ejemplo: I am a special educator working at an organization where I train children with disabilities such as cerebral palsy, blindness, autism, and ADHD.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting the article 'an' to 'a' before 'vocational institute' and by adding linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I work at a vocational institute where I teach children with disabilities, helping them to become independent members of society.

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and well-structured. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid repeating 'yes' and 'quite'. Also, use linking words to enhance coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I enjoy working there because my manager and colleagues are very supportive and always willing to assist me with any tasks or goals. Therefore, I find my job very rewarding.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be more concise and natural. Use articles correctly ('a positive and encouraging environment') and avoid overly formal words like 'undeniably' in spoken English. Also, use linking words for better flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because it offers a positive and encouraging environment where I can improve my skills and train children more effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear terms like 'EHT'. Use articles properly ('an expert') and clarify or correct any unclear terms. Also, add linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: My future plan is to become an expert in my profession, especially in working with children with disabilities such as autism and ADHD, to help improve their communication and concentration skills.

× I work in an vocational institute.

✓ I work in a vocational institute.

The article 'an' is used before words starting with a vowel sound. Since 'vocational' starts with a consonant sound 'v', the correct article is 'a'. This is a common article usage error.

× My basic job is to teach and educate children with disabilities so that they can navigate independently in the society.

✓ My basic job is to teach and educate children with disabilities so that they can navigate independently in society.

The phrase 'in the society' is incorrect here because 'society' is used in a general sense. The definite article 'the' is not needed before 'society' when referring to society in general.

× Undeniably, my working place is one of the best places available in Amritsar to gain experience because it provides positive and encouraging environment to upgrade my own skills and to train children more effectively.

✓ Undeniably, my workplace is one of the best places available in Amritsar to gain experience because it provides a positive and encouraging environment to upgrade my own skills and to train children more effectively.

The term 'working place' is better expressed as 'workplace' which is a single word. Also, 'positive and encouraging environment' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'positive' because 'environment' is a singular countable noun.

× My future aim is to become expert in my profession, particularly in dealing with children having disability like autism and EHT to improve their communication and concentration skills.

✓ My future aim is to become an expert in my profession, particularly in dealing with children having disabilities like autism and EHT to improve their communication and concentration skills.

The word 'expert' is a singular countable noun and requires the article 'an' before it. Also, 'disability' should be plural 'disabilities' because it refers to multiple types of disabilities like autism and EHT.