Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and focus on correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add relevant details logically.

Ejemplo: I have recently graduated and started working as a customer service representative at Domino's, a reputable company. I enjoy my job because I interact with customers and receive a good salary.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your role and responsibilities. Also, pay attention to verb tenses and plural forms.

Ejemplo: I work at Domino's, a well-known food production company. My duties include taking customer orders, preparing pizzas, and ensuring that orders are delivered within 10 minutes to avoid delays.

Sugerencia: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words. Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to express your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because I trust the company and enjoy participating in food preparation. Moreover, communicating with customers helps me understand their experiences, which motivates me to do my best.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and coherence by structuring your answer with a clear main idea and supporting details. Avoid confusing phrases and ensure correct word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I like my workplace because the environment is very good and suitable for me. My teammates are polite and cooperative, and I learn many things from them. I also have a goal to become an assistant manager in the future.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear and structured response with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your plans logically and give specific details about your goals and current actions.

Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to become a teacher because I want to take care of children, which is my dream job. Currently, I am studying part-time to achieve this goal, so I need to work part-time to gain practical experience.

× I'm, uh, right now I have finished my graduations and now I started my work at the customer service representative as a reputative company, Domino's.

✓ I'm, uh, right now I have finished my graduation and now I have started my work as a customer service representative at a reputable company, Domino's.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'graduations' (plural) instead of 'graduation' (singular) and mixes past tense 'started' with present perfect 'have finished'. The correct form is 'have started' to indicate a recent action continuing to the present. Also, 'reputative' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'reputable'.

× I started my work at the customer service representative as a reputative company, Domino's.

✓ I started my work as a customer service representative at a reputable company, Domino's.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'customer service representative'; the correct preposition is 'as' to indicate the role. Also, 'reputative' is incorrect; 'reputable' is the correct adjective for a respected company.

× I'm working a reputed company in Domino's and a very good company and the food productions.

✓ I'm working at a reputed company, Domino's, which is a very good company in food production.

The verb 'working' requires the preposition 'at' to indicate the place of work. Also, 'in Domino's' is incorrect; the company name should be used as a proper noun. 'Food productions' should be 'food production' as an uncountable noun.

× And sometimes I talked with the customer and take orders.

✓ And sometimes I talk with customers and take orders.

The sentence mixes past tense 'talked' with present tense 'take'. Since the context is current work, present tense 'talk' is appropriate. Also, 'customer' should be plural 'customers' to indicate multiple people.

× And sometimes I talked with the customer and take orders.

✓ And sometimes I talk with customers and take orders.

The singular 'customer' should be plural 'customers' because the speaker interacts with multiple customers.

× I also prepared pizzas and it's our responsibility to provide the order on the time before delay.

✓ I also prepare pizzas and it's our responsibility to deliver the order on time without delay.

The verb tense should be present 'prepare' to match ongoing duties. The phrase 'on the time before delay' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on time without delay'.

× It is the good time for is the 10 minute, so I'll join.

✓ The ideal time is 10 minutes, so I'll join.

The phrase is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'The good time for is the 10 minute' is incorrect; it should be 'The ideal time is 10 minutes'. Also, 'join' is unclear in context but kept as is.

× Yes, definitely it's a good place for me to work because I can trust to make take part in preparing food and it is the good job for me to communicate with the customers and know about their experience and it is give me motivation to work in this.

✓ Yes, definitely it's a good place for me to work because I can trust to take part in preparing food, and it is a good job for me to communicate with customers and learn about their experience, which gives me motivation to work.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'Make take part' is incorrect; 'take part' suffices. 'It is the good job' should be 'a good job'. 'It is give me motivation' should be 'which gives me motivation'. Also, 'the customers' is better as 'customers' in general.

× To be honest, I like my wife please very well because the environment of this workplace is very good at a suitable for me and my teammates are very polite and they always cooperate with me and I'll learn many things from my and also I want to be become assistant major in the future and I have a target related to this.

✓ To be honest, I like my workplace very much because the environment is very good and suitable for me. My teammates are very polite and always cooperate with me. I have learned many things from them, and I also want to become an assistant manager in the future. I have a target related to this.

'My wife please' is incorrect; it should be 'my workplace'. 'At a suitable' is incorrect; 'suitable for me' is correct. 'I'll learn many things from my' is incomplete; it should be 'I have learned many things from them'. 'Assistant major' is incorrect; the correct term is 'assistant manager'.

× In futures, I have planned to be become A at least I do educate teacher because it's a good way to we can take care of the children and is the my dream job.

✓ In the future, I have planned to become at least an education teacher because it's a good way to take care of children, and it is my dream job.

'In futures' should be 'In the future'. 'Be become A at least I do educate teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'become at least an education teacher'. 'We can take care of the children' is better as 'take care of children'. 'Is the my dream job' should be 'it is my dream job'.

× And now I started to part time study for this.

✓ And now I have started part-time study for this.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have started' to indicate a recent action continuing to the present. 'Part time study' should be hyphenated as 'part-time study'.

× So that's why I need to do more part time work and I need to get the practical.

✓ So that's why I need to do more part-time work and gain practical experience.

'Get the practical' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'gain practical experience'. 'Part time work' should be hyphenated as 'part-time work'.