Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to complete your sentences clearly. Also, use correct grammar such as 'I have approximately 15 years of experience' instead of 'I am having'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am a working professional with approximately 15 years of experience in business analytics, specifically in the automotive industry.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides good information but lacks coherence and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Also, be specific and accurate with numbers and terms, for example, 'approximately 25 plants' instead of '2025'.

Ejemplo: I work at Minta Automotive Solutions Limited, located in Noida. The company has approximately 25 plants across India and exports automotive parts for original equipment manufacturers, supplying to top-rated automotive companies.

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive but can be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words and use linking words like 'Moreover' or 'Additionally' to connect ideas. Also, correct grammar such as 'salary hikes are good' and 'people are slowly getting recognition'.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work. I have completed 10 years here this month. The work environment and culture are very positive. Additionally, the company offers good promotions and salary hikes, and employees gradually receive recognition for their efforts.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses your opinion but can be clearer and more concise. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words like 'However' to show contrast and provide specific reasons for your feelings.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like this place very much. However, after completing 10 years here, I feel restricted and do not see much future growth. Therefore, I would like to move to a company that offers more opportunities for growth and learning.

Sugerencia: Your answer is brief and somewhat unclear. Try to express your plans more clearly and use linking words to explain your goals. Avoid filler words and use correct grammar, for example, 'I would like to lead a business analytics department and use data effectively to drive company growth and sales.'

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to grow in the field of business analytics by leading a business analytics department. My goal is to use data effectively to help companies achieve growth and increase sales.

× I am having approx 15 years of experience in business analytics.

✓ I have approximately 15 years of experience in business analytics.

The modal verb 'am having' is incorrect here because 'have' is a stative verb and is not used in continuous tenses. The correct form is simple present 'have' to express possession or experience.

× I am working within automotive industry and uh.

✓ I am working in the automotive industry.

The preposition 'within' is not appropriate here; 'in' is the correct preposition to indicate working inside a particular industry. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'automotive industry'.

× I'm working with Minta Automotive Solutions Limited, the company situated in Noida.

✓ I work with Minta Automotive Solutions Limited, the company situated in Noida.

For permanent or regular employment, simple present tense 'I work' is preferred over present continuous 'I'm working'.

× They are having approximately 2025 plants in all over India.

✓ They have approximately 2025 plants all over India.

'They are having' is incorrect; 'have' is a stative verb and should be in simple present. Also, 'in all over India' is incorrect; 'all over India' suffices without 'in'.

× They are exporting as well.

✓ They also export.

Present continuous 'are exporting' is less appropriate for habitual actions; simple present 'export' is better to express regular activities.

× They are the manufacturer of automotive parts for original equipments and they are supplying to the top, uh, rated, uh, automotive companies.

✓ They are the manufacturers of automotive parts for original equipment and they supply to the top-rated automotive companies.

'Manufacturer' should be plural 'manufacturers' to agree with 'they'. 'Equipments' is uncountable and should be 'equipment'. Present continuous 'are supplying' should be simple present 'supply' for habitual action. Also, 'top rated' should be hyphenated as 'top-rated'.

× I have completed 10 years this month only and I'm finding, uh, its environment very good.

✓ I have completed 10 years this month and I find its environment very good.

'I'm finding' is incorrect here; 'find' is a stative verb and should be in simple present tense. Also, 'this month only' is better as 'this month'.

× Working culture is very nice.

✓ The working culture is very nice.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'The' before 'working culture' to specify the particular culture being referred to.

× They're giving good promotions.

✓ They give good promotions.

Present continuous 'They're giving' is less appropriate for habitual actions; simple present 'They give' is better.

× The salary hikes are goods and people are not rapidly but slowly, slowly getting the recognition as well and the place they want.

✓ The salary hikes are good and people are not rapidly but slowly getting recognition as well as the place they want.

'Goods' is incorrect; it should be 'good' as an adjective. The phrase 'getting the recognition' should be 'getting recognition' without 'the'. Also, 'as well and the place they want' is unclear; 'as well as the place they want' is better.

× Yes, I like the yes, I like this place very much and but, uh, as, as I have completed 10 years here, I feel restricted and I don't see my future here.

✓ Yes, I like this place very much, but as I have completed 10 years here, I feel restricted and don't see my future here.

The sentence has redundant words 'the yes, I like' and awkward conjunction use 'and but'. Simplifying to 'but' and removing redundancy improves clarity.

× So definitely I would like to move on to some good company where I get more growth and more learnings for my coming future.

✓ So definitely, I would like to move on to a good company where I can get more growth and learning opportunities for my future.

'Some good company' is better as 'a good company'. 'More learnings' is uncountable and better as 'learning opportunities'. Also, 'coming future' is redundant; 'future' suffices. Adding modal 'can' clarifies ability.

× I would like to have business analysts department and want to give good uh pace with the data to any company for growth and sales.

✓ I would like to have a business analytics department and want to provide good pace with data to any company for growth and sales.

Missing article 'a' before 'business analytics department'. 'Business analysts department' is incorrect; 'business analytics department' is correct. 'Give good pace with the data' is awkward; 'provide good pace with data' is better. 'The data' can be 'data' in general.