Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I am currently a 12th-grade student at Taking High School in North Vietnam. I major in social science because I am not interested in science subjects like physics.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp lại và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: I am currently a student at Taking High School in North Vietnam. I have been studying here for nearly three years.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời để tránh bị bỏ dở. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because the students are friendly, kind, and hardworking. Moreover, the teachers are professional and warm-hearted, which creates a positive atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, of course. It is the place where I was born and raised, so I have many fond memories there. However, in the future, I would like to live in a big city because I enjoy its hustle and bustle.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động và thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: I decided to become a teacher when I was a little girl because I love children. I want to share knowledge with them and help them grow.

× I'm currently a 12 grader student in a high school called taking High high school which located in the North Vietnam and I major in social science subjects because in from my perspective I don't have like for science subject like physics.

✓ I'm currently a 12th grade student at a high school called Taking High School, which is located in North Vietnam, and I major in social science subjects because, from my perspective, I don't like science subjects like physics.

The phrase '12 grader student' should be '12th grade student' to correctly express the grade level. 'Taking High high school' is corrected to 'Taking High School' for proper noun capitalization and repetition removal. 'Which located' needs the verb 'is' to form 'which is located'. 'In the North Vietnam' should be 'in North Vietnam' as 'North Vietnam' is a proper noun without 'the'. 'I don't have like for science subject' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like science subjects' to express preference correctly and use plural for 'subjects'.

× At present, I am a social science subject student at high high school in Hungary, was located in the North Vietnam and I have been study in this school for nearly three years and at that at that year I will evaluate it.

✓ At present, I am a social science student at Taking High School in North Vietnam, and I have been studying at this school for nearly three years. This year, I will graduate.

'High high school in Hungary' is likely a mistake; corrected to 'Taking High School in North Vietnam'. 'Was located' should be 'which is located' or omitted if redundant. 'I have been study' should be 'I have been studying' to use the present perfect continuous tense correctly. 'At that at that year I will evaluate it' is unclear; likely intended to say 'This year, I will graduate' or 'complete my studies'.

× Die filter Yes, because the student in my school are friendly, kind and hard working meanwhile the teachers are professional and warm heart. We create a positive atmosphere addition my school offer a highly.

✓ Yes, because the students in my school are friendly, kind, and hardworking. Meanwhile, the teachers are professional and warm-hearted. We create a positive atmosphere. In addition, my school offers high-quality education.

'The student' should be plural 'the students' to agree with 'are'. 'Hard working' is one word 'hardworking'. 'Warm heart' should be 'warm-hearted' as an adjective. 'Addition' should be 'In addition,' to connect sentences properly. 'My school offer a highly' is incomplete; corrected to 'my school offers high-quality education' for clarity and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, of course, because it's a blade which I was born and have brought up. Moreover, it was contained fond of memory of me more. However, in the future, I wanted to settle down in the big city because I adore the hustle and bustle of the big city.

✓ Yes, of course, because it's the place where I was born and raised. Moreover, it contains many fond memories for me. However, in the future, I want to settle down in a big city because I adore the hustle and bustle of city life.

'Blade' is incorrect; should be 'place'. 'Which I was born and have brought up' should be 'where I was born and raised'. 'It was contained fond of memory of me more' is incorrect; corrected to 'it contains many fond memories for me'. 'I wanted' should be 'I want' to match present/future intention. 'The big city' changed to 'a big city' for general reference. 'Hustle and bustle of the big city' simplified to 'hustle and bustle of city life' for natural expression.

× I made a decision to become a teacher when I was a little girl. I, I was dream to become a teacher because I want to. I want to give the children the the knowledge, more knowledge and I love children.

✓ I made a decision to become a teacher when I was a little girl. I dreamed of becoming a teacher because I want to give children more knowledge, and I love children.

'I was dream' is incorrect; should be 'I dreamed' (past tense). 'To become a teacher' is better expressed as 'of becoming a teacher' after 'dreamed'. 'The the knowledge, more knowledge' is redundant; corrected to 'more knowledge'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.