Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ejemplo: I'm a senior high school student at an international school. I enjoy studying here because I get to learn about many different cultures and languages.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more specific about your tasks.

Ejemplo: I work at a marketing firm where I create promotional videos and online posts to attract customers.

Sugerencia: There are grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions in your answer. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a great place to work because the company offers monthly bonuses to employees who perform well, and they also organize trips for the staff.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings more naturally and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid redundancy and be more specific.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because my colleagues are very friendly, and their hard work motivates me to do my best.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct verb tenses, and avoid filler words. Be specific about your future plans.

Ejemplo: I haven't decided yet, but I plan to continue working at this company and contribute more so I can earn bonuses and save money for my personal goals.

× I quite be fond of studying here.

✓ I quite like studying here.

The phrase 'be fond of' is followed by a noun or gerund, but 'quite be fond of' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I quite like studying here' or 'I am quite fond of studying here.' Here, 'quite like' is simpler and more natural.

× It has a lot of cultures and languages that I can learn from it.

✓ It has a lot of cultures and languages that I can learn from.

The phrase 'learn from it' is redundant because 'that' already refers to 'it.' The preposition 'from' should be directly connected to 'learn' without repeating the object.

× I'm doing the promotion jobs which I need to make a lot of videos and posts online in order to attract customers.

✓ I'm doing promotion jobs which require me to make a lot of videos and posts online in order to attract customers.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'promotion jobs' because it is a general statement. Also, 'which I need to make' is awkward; 'which require me to make' is more appropriate.

× I think the companies provides us a tremendous working conditions.

✓ I think the company provides us with tremendous working conditions.

'Companies' is plural but 'provides' is singular; they must agree. Also, 'a tremendous working conditions' is incorrect because 'conditions' is plural; 'tremendous working conditions' without 'a' is correct. 'Provides us with' is the correct phrase.

× employees who behave good and also they will organize the trip.

✓ employees who behave well and also organize trips.

'Behave' should be followed by the adverb 'well,' not the adjective 'good.' Also, 'organize the trip' is better as 'organize trips' for general meaning.

× I'd quite be fond of of my current working place as the people in our companies, they are quite welcome to each other and also they put a lot of efforts that can inspire me to work towards.

✓ I'm quite fond of my current workplace because the people in our company are very welcoming to each other and they put in a lot of effort that inspires me to work hard.

'I'd quite be fond of of' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm quite fond of.' 'Working place' is better as 'workplace.' 'Companies' should be singular 'company' to match context. 'They are quite welcome to each other' is incorrect; it should be 'very welcoming to each other.' 'Put a lot of efforts' should be 'put in a lot of effort.' 'Work towards' is vague; 'work hard' is clearer.

× I haven't think about yet, but I think I'll continue working in this company and you create more value for the firm so that you know I can get more bonus and the capital that I can spend in more place and more of my own things.

✓ I haven't thought about it yet, but I think I'll continue working in this company and create more value for the firm so that I can get more bonuses and the capital to spend on more places and more of my own things.

'Haven't think' is incorrect; the past participle 'thought' is needed after 'haven't.' 'You create' should be 'I create' to match the subject. 'More bonus' should be 'more bonuses' (plural). 'Spend in more place' should be 'spend on more places.'