Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by combining ideas and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I work as a food engineer at Magnum Essence, a small company that produces syrups and powders. I'm responsible for maintaining certifications to ensure our products can be sold in Australia.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Try to use correct prepositions and articles, and make the sentence smoother by linking ideas.

Ejemplo: I work at Magnum Essence, which is located in Malaga, about 45 minutes north of Perth city.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows positive feelings but has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar, and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love working there because it's a small company where we have really good relationships and respect each other's work. We act professionally, and I feel I am growing a lot in my role.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the question and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to continue working there. I plan to stay for another three to five years because the company offers me opportunities to gain new experiences and develop my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is informal and contains hesitations and grammar mistakes. Try to use more formal language, avoid fillers, and organise your ideas clearly with linking words.

Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to train in new product development at the company. For example, I aim to create a gum protein powder and start selling protein products. Additionally, I would like to help small companies obtain their HACCP certification.

× I work I am a food engineer and I am working in a small company called Magnum Essence as a food technologist.

✓ I work as a food engineer and I am working in a small company called Magnum Essence as a food technologist.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction or punctuation between 'I work' and 'I am a food engineer', causing a run-on sentence. Adding 'as' clarifies the role and connecting the clauses properly improves sentence structure.

× In this company we produce syrups and powders and I am the person in charge to keep all the certifications on date to have the right to keep selling food products in Australia.

✓ In this company, we produce syrups and powders and I am the person in charge of keeping all the certifications up to date to have the right to keep selling food products in Australia.

The phrase 'in charge to keep' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in charge of' followed by a gerund ('keeping'). Also, 'on date' should be 'up to date' to express current validity.

× The name of the company is Magnum Essence and it is located in Malaga, 45 minute north of per city.

✓ The name of the company is Magnum Essence and it is located in Malaga, 45 minutes north of Perth city.

The phrase '45 minute' should be plural '45 minutes' to match quantity. 'per city' is incorrect; the correct place name is 'Perth city'.

× It's a small company in where we have a really good relationship, want to want to each other.

✓ It's a small company where we have a really good relationship and want to help each other.

The phrase 'in where' is incorrect; 'where' alone suffices. The phrase 'want to want to each other' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'want to help each other' or similar to express mutual support.

× We work like a professionals and I am growing a lot there.

✓ We work like professionals and I am growing a lot there.

'a professionals' is incorrect because 'professionals' is plural and does not need an article. Removing 'a' corrects the phrase.

× I am planning to to stay for the company at least for another three or five years because they are giving me the chance to bring new experiences and I am growing a lot in that company.

✓ I am planning to stay with the company for at least another three to five years because they are giving me the chance to gain new experiences and I am growing a lot in that company.

The phrase 'stay for the company' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'stay with the company'. Also, 'bring new experiences' is incorrect; 'gain new experiences' is appropriate. 'Three or five years' is better expressed as 'three to five years'.

× Well, I'm gonna be training for new product development in the company.

✓ Well, I'm going to be training for new product development in the company.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal or semi-formal speech or writing.

× Uh, so one of the ideas that I have in mind is start to create my gum protein powder.

✓ Uh, so one of the ideas that I have in mind is to start creating my gum protein powder.

After 'is', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to start' followed by a gerund 'creating' to express the intended action properly.

× So I gonna start to sell proteins and I would like to umm, help the small company to get their house up certificate as well.

✓ So I am going to start selling proteins and I would like to, um, help the small company to get their HACCP certificate as well.

'Gonna' should be replaced with 'am going to' for correctness. 'Start to sell' is better as 'start selling'. 'House up certificate' is unclear; likely intended 'HACCP certificate', a common food safety certification. Also, commas are added for natural pauses.