Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh các câu rời rạc và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 3-5 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: I'm currently a senior student majoring in English Linguistics. Previously, I worked at Hilton and also tutored three primary school students in Vietnamese, English, and math. This experience helped me develop my teaching skills.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về nơi làm việc để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ejemplo: I used to teach students at their homes, but now I work as a teaching assistant at a learning center in District 1. Every day, I help students with their English exercises, which also allows me to improve my own skills.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu kết hợp mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'contribute our communication' và thay bằng cách diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Of course, I think it is an ideal place to work, especially for teenagers like me, because the center supports students from poor backgrounds. For example, we provide free tutoring and learning materials. We also enjoy working there because we can contribute to their education and improve our communication skills.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh các câu rời rạc.

Ejemplo: Although I am not well paid, I still love working there because I can meet the children every day and see how they improve with the lessons I give them.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và diễn đạt rõ ràng kế hoạch tương lai của mình.

Ejemplo: I think I will continue as a teacher because I really enjoy teaching children. I love witnessing their daily progress, which motivates me to do my best.

× Three primary school students.

✓ I taught three primary school students.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I taught' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× This is parents allow me to develop my teaching.

✓ This is because the parents allow me to develop my teaching.

The original sentence is unclear and missing a preposition or conjunction to connect ideas properly. Adding 'because' clarifies the cause-effect relationship.

× I went to students houses in the past to teach them but now I am teaching assistant at center in District 1.

✓ I went to students' houses in the past to teach them, but now I am a teaching assistant at a center in District 1.

Possessive form 'students'' is needed to indicate ownership. Also, articles 'a' are required before 'teaching assistant' and 'center' for grammatical correctness.

× Every day I help them with their English exercise and I also can improve my skills.

✓ Every day I help them with their English exercises and I can also improve my skills.

'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to match the context of multiple tasks. Also, 'can also' is the correct word order for modal verbs and adverbs.

× For example, we can provide free tutoring and learning materials. We also enjoy working there because we can contribute our communication.

✓ For example, we can provide free tutoring and learning materials. We also enjoy working there because we can contribute through our communication skills.

The phrase 'contribute our communication' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'through' and specifying 'communication skills' clarifies the meaning.

× Ondo I am not well paid I still. Love working there because I can. Meet the children every day and see how they improve day by day with the lesson I give them.

✓ Although I am not well paid, I still love working there because I can meet the children every day and see how they improve day by day with the lessons I give them.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Combining them into a coherent sentence with proper conjunctions and punctuation improves clarity and grammar.

× I think I will continue as a picture.

✓ I think I will continue as a teacher.

The word 'picture' is incorrect in this context. The intended word is likely 'teacher' or a similar profession related to teaching.

× I am really into teaching the children in.

✓ I am really into teaching children.

The preposition 'in' at the end is unnecessary and makes the sentence incomplete. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× I love to witness how to improve day by day and it gives me a lot of motivation to do my best.

✓ I love to witness how they improve day by day, and it gives me a lot of motivation to do my best.

The sentence lacks the subject 'they' after 'how' to indicate who is improving. Adding 'they' clarifies the meaning.