Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is natural and coherent.

Ejemplo: I am currently working as a financial analyst at Fanworks Analytics. I have completed one year of experience there, and I am continuing in this role.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Provide a clear and complete sentence, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I work for Inbox Analytics LLP, which is located in Gurugram. However, I usually work from home as part of the company's flexible work policy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about why you like the office environment.

Ejemplo: Yes, the office environment is very good. I have attended three or four events there, which allowed me to observe how my colleagues work. I really enjoyed these experiences because they helped me understand the work culture better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace very much. As I mentioned, I have attended several events there, which made me appreciate the environment. If I get the chance to work from the office in the future, I would definitely take it.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear, structured response with linking words and specific details about your plans.

Ejemplo: Currently, I am preparing for my IELTS exam and aiming to score band 7. After that, I plan to apply for the January intake in Germany to pursue an MBA in Finance. Upon completing my MBA, I hope to advance my career in the financial sector.

× After completing my graduation, I started working as a financial analyst in Fanworks Analytics and till now I have.

✓ After completing my graduation, I started working as a financial analyst in Fanworks Analytics and have been working there till now.

The original sentence incorrectly ends with 'and till now I have' which is incomplete and unclear. The correction uses the present perfect continuous tense 'have been working' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present, which fits the context.

× I have completed my one year working experience in pen works an currently I'm also.

✓ I have completed one year of working experience in Fanworks and currently I'm also working there.

The phrase 'my one year working experience' is awkward; 'one year of working experience' is correct. Also, 'pen works an' seems to be a typo for 'Fanworks' and the sentence is incomplete. The correction clarifies the company name and completes the sentence.

× My company was. My company is in Gurugram.

✓ My company is located in Gurugram.

The sentence 'My company was.' is incomplete and unclear. The correction combines the idea into a single clear sentence indicating the company's location.

× Its name is if Inbox Analytics LLP.

✓ Its name is Inbox Analytics LLP.

The word 'if' is incorrect here and seems to be a typo. Removing 'if' corrects the sentence.

× But I do work can work from home as a work from home.

✓ But I can work from home as a work-from-home employee.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and redundant. The correction uses 'can work from home' correctly and clarifies the phrase 'work-from-home' as an adjective.

× I visited there for four or three. Events.

✓ I visited there for three or four events.

The phrase 'four or three events' is awkward; the correct order is 'three or four events'. Also, 'Events' should not be capitalized.

× I saw how other employees work, how my colleague work there, and yes, I really enjoyed it.

✓ I saw how other employees work, how my colleagues work there, and yes, I really enjoyed it.

'Colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to match 'employees' and the verb 'work' agrees with plural subject.

× Yes, I as I already tell that I had attended a few events there.

✓ Yes, as I already told, I had attended a few events there.

The phrase 'I as I already tell' is incorrect. The correction uses 'as I already told' to indicate past action.

× I really like my working place very much.

✓ I really like my workplace very much.

'Working place' is not a common collocation; 'workplace' is the correct noun.

× In future if I get a chance to do work from office then I will definitely work, yes.

✓ In the future, if I get a chance to work from the office, then I will definitely do so.

The phrase 'In future' should be 'In the future'. Also, 'do work from office' is corrected to 'work from the office' for natural phrasing.

× My future plan that currently I am preparing for my Isles exam after crack king with it by band 7 then I will opt for January intake in Germany for my MBA in Finance after completing MBA.

✓ My future plan is that currently I am preparing for my IELTS exam. After cracking it with band 7, I will opt for the January intake in Germany for my MBA in Finance. After completing the MBA...

The sentence is run-on and contains errors like 'Isles' instead of 'IELTS', 'crack king' instead of 'cracking'. The correction breaks it into clear sentences and corrects vocabulary and grammar.