Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some redundant and confusing phrases. Try to give a clear and concise response directly to the question, using simple and correct English. Avoid unnecessary details that do not add value. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I am currently a student at the University of Lahore, studying Doctor of Pharmacy. My course focuses on pharmaceutical sciences, including the study of medicines and their ingredients.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a complete sentence that directly answers the question. Use linking words to explain your duties clearly and avoid grammatical mistakes. Keep your sentences simple and coherent.

Ejemplo: I currently work at a pharmacy where I sell medicines to customers. I also advise them on how to use the medicines as prescribed by doctors.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete and confusing phrases. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because it is well-known and provides good benefits to employees. The customers are friendly, and the management supports the staff well.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally positive but has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to avoid repeating words and explain your reasons clearly using linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your feelings.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy working there because the company respects its employees and offers many benefits. The work environment is friendly, and I feel valued as a worker.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your plans but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with correct sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your plans logically and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: After graduating from university, I plan to gain two to three years of experience working in a pharmaceutical company. Then, I hope to start my own pharmacy business in the future.

× Well, I'm a student of pharmaceutical sciences department in Lahore, the university in the Hall University as well as I'm studying the doctor of pharmacy that is related to the Madison and the ingredients and excipients that we used to make A1 tablet.

✓ Well, I'm a student in the pharmaceutical sciences department in Lahore, at the Hall University, and I'm also studying for the Doctor of Pharmacy, which is related to the medicine and the ingredients and excipients that we use to make A1 tablets.

The preposition 'of' should be 'in' when referring to being part of a department. 'At' is used for the university location. 'Studying the doctor of pharmacy' is incorrect; it should be 'studying for the Doctor of Pharmacy'. 'Madison' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'medicine'. 'Used to make' should be 'use to make' to indicate current practice.

× Well currently I'm working in everything pharmacy at I sell the medicine to the customer and also prescribed as some of the product that is that is purse club by the physicians as well.

✓ Well, currently I'm working in a pharmacy where I sell medicine to customers and also prescribe some of the products that are prescribed by physicians as well.

'Everything pharmacy' is unclear; 'a pharmacy' is correct. 'The medicine' should be 'medicine' as an uncountable noun. 'The customer' should be 'customers' to indicate plural. 'Prescribed as some of the product' is incorrect; it should be 'prescribe some of the products'. 'That is purse club' is incorrect and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'that are prescribed'.

× I got to the customer that how long the medicine is needed for him hard as well as I also tried to.

✓ I inform the customer about how long the medicine is needed for them, and I also try to help.

'I got to the customer' is incorrect; 'I inform the customer' is appropriate. 'For him hard' is unclear; 'for them' is correct pronoun usage. The sentence is incomplete; added 'and I also try to help' to complete the thought.

× Yes, it is a very famous and supported place where I'm currently working. Because, uh, there is but the customer as well as they also give many beneficial on the on the national liberals like on the Iguassu swords as well as the adeptly Linus that Glenn liners of the.

✓ Yes, it is a very famous and supportive place where I'm currently working because there are many customers, and they also give many benefits on the national levels like on the issues related to health as well as the additional lines that are offered.

'Supported place' should be 'supportive place'. 'There is but the customer' is incorrect; 'there are many customers' is correct. 'Beneficial on the on the national liberals' is incorrect; 'benefits on the national levels' is correct. The rest of the sentence is unclear and corrected to a plausible meaning.

× Yes, I really enjoyed the place where I'm working because they provide us with very beneficial a very beneficial aspects to the employee, respect their their workers as well as they also have some heart attachments with their working people's.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy the place where I work because they provide us with very beneficial aspects to the employees, respect their workers, and also have some heartfelt attachments with their working people.

'I really enjoyed' should be 'I really enjoy' to match present tense. 'A very beneficial aspects' is incorrect; 'very beneficial aspects' is correct. 'Employee' should be plural 'employees'. 'Their their' is a repetition error. 'Heart attachments' should be 'heartfelt attachments'. 'Working people's' should be 'working people' without apostrophe.

× Soon in my future after my graduating from the university, I will start my own business or for pharmacy becaused again and experience two to three years in pharmaceutical products in the will charge company, a welder protected company.

✓ Soon in my future, after graduating from the university, I will start my own pharmacy business because I will have gained two to three years of experience in pharmaceutical products in a well-established company.

'After my graduating' should be 'after graduating'. 'Or for pharmacy' is incorrect; 'own pharmacy business' is correct. 'Becaused again and experience' is incorrect; 'because I will have gained experience' is correct. 'Will charge company, a welder protected company' is unclear; corrected to 'well-established company'.

× So I'm thinking that in the future I will start my own business that is relate.

✓ So I'm thinking that in the future I will start my own business that is related to pharmacy.

'That is relate' is incorrect; it should be 'that is related to' followed by the relevant field, assumed here as pharmacy.